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Bleach (Grimmjow/Orihime)

Jul 06, 2007 10:50

Title: Contradiction
Author: aviss
Pairing: Grimmjow/Orihime
Word count: 368
Prompt: Hollow hole - "It was fascinating and horrifying all at once - just like him."
Rating: NC-17

( Contradiction )

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Comments 13

irrelevant July 6 2007, 10:30:34 UTC

You know, you get better with every fic you write. You characterized these two perfectly. *purrs*

aviss July 6 2007, 10:46:40 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure about those two but I'm glad you liked it.

ilyat July 6 2007, 22:37:29 UTC

Oh man. That was great. :3 I love how true to each character you kept it, all the while still managing to make the way the two interacted believable. I especially liked the repeated contrast between Grimmjow and Ichigo - and how she consciously noted his gentleness as not belonging.

(And yay! That was also my prompt. ^^)

aviss July 6 2007, 23:38:16 UTC

Oh thanks! Your prompt was great I couldn't help but to claim it even if I don't ship this pairing, I'm happy you liked it!

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aviss July 6 2007, 23:38:40 UTC

Thank you!

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aviss July 9 2007, 07:34:13 UTC

Thanks!

ravenbell July 7 2007, 04:51:18 UTC

The brain has gone splat. This is so perfect for Grimmjow, and the idea of Orihime taking him for everything he's worth is just so twisted and wonderfully wrong.

aviss July 9 2007, 07:35:26 UTC

Thanks! I love Grimmjow at his worst, he's so perfect...