Final Fantasy XII (Ashe/Rasler/Basch)

Jul 03, 2007 06:02

Title: Whisper
Author/Artist: Laylah
Rating: PG-13 for spooky
Word count: 984
Summary: Ashe has so many ghosts in her life. It seems cruel of the fates to confront her only with this one.
A/N: I...I'm terribly sorry this isn't darker. Basch makes the face and I turn into a big mushball. I hope you can still enjoy it.

Whisper )

laylah, final fantasy xii

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lassarina July 4 2007, 03:07:55 UTC
Oh, I love this. I love that he's as he would have been when he died, and the jealousy/hope dynamic, and how both Ashe and Basch instinctively move to apologize. It's absolutely beautiful and creepy, but in the way that I appreciate rather than making me want to go cling to my teddy bear ^_^;

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laylah July 4 2007, 03:14:27 UTC
♥ Thank you! The creepy one appreciates is a high compliment, I think. ^^;

and yeah. so awkward. because it *would* be only human to move on, and yet at the same time -- how does one explain that to the dead, who can't?

...I imagine that problem comes up rather a lot in Ivalice, after reading through the bestiary and taking on all the hunts.

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mad_rex July 4 2007, 07:07:00 UTC
(Okay, Springkink is killing me already. ^^; I can't promise I'm going to get to everything, but from now on I'm going to at least try to keep up with what gets crossposted to my flist. So.)

Oh, wow. This is...this is way too good.

I kept copying lines I wanted to quote, because they just friggin' killed me. But after friggin' five, I just gave up and started jibbering.

Ohhh, Ashe. Thank you for being a princess that kills things. ^___^ And Basch, and the guilt, and Ashe again for already knowing this and knowing just how to stop it. And Rasler! Even Rasler, with the images and the gentleness and if you will believe in me... *flails* I am just shaking my head right now. Seriously.

This...may be the closest I've come to posting total gibberish as a review. ^^;; My apologies.

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laylah July 4 2007, 14:53:08 UTC
(it's a *crazy* amount of stuff to try to keep up with! I'm sort overwhelmed myself. ^^)

Thank you so much! I fretted like crazy about working on this one, whether it was *doing* enough, whether the dynamic among them was working. I'm so glad that it worked so well for you. ^_^

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laylah July 4 2007, 14:53:53 UTC
*prr* Thank you!

And yes. He makes the "I'll suffer if you really want me to" face, and immediately I'm all, "nooooo~ that's not what I want at aaaalll...." *lose* ^^;

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atouchofyou July 4 2007, 16:03:28 UTC
It's so beautiful! Lovely job!

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laylah July 4 2007, 17:44:27 UTC
^^ Thank you!

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sister_coyote July 6 2007, 17:13:07 UTC
The bittersweet is so beautiful, and his silence ...and of course I am weak, weak like anything to the hopeful ending. ♥

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laylah July 6 2007, 17:30:19 UTC
♥ Hopefulness! In the midst of woe! *small woobie face*

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