Card Captor Sakura, (Touya/Yukito)

[allira_dream]

Title: A Finger On My Heart.
Author/Artist: allira_dream
Rating: R/NC17.
Warnings: None.
Word count: 845.
Summary: Touya touches him as if he would break.
A/N: Prompt: Card Captor Sakura, Touya/Yukito: Hurt/comfort - “You passed out again.”

Comments

[reversedhymnal]

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I- I can't. Oh, wow. Can't form coherent. Things. And brain. OW. That was. Guh. *dies*

That was positively beautiful and heart wrenching and sweet and full of ow. I'M SO HAPPY IT WORKS OUT IN THE END, ;_; B-but, this is a perfect example as to what they had to have been goin through, and it's written so superbly, so delicately and sweetly in such soft yet solid colors, and I think one of my absolute favorite aspects was quite probably what Yuki couldn't see.

*melts* You make this promptress very, very happy, ♥

....ARGH. what happened to my Touya and Yukito icon, damn it? >.< MUST FIND ONE.

[allira_dream]

CLAMP, breaking hearts since... forever, actually.

I'm so glad you liked it! It's been forever since I last wrote them and it's one of Those Couples that should be written carefully, y'know? I was SO NERVOUS. Yay that you liked it!! ♥!!!

[telrunya]

What can I say? This is so touching and works so well. Really, I love this. Touya and Yukito and the way you wrote it ♥~~, it's beautiful. ;_;

[allira_dream]

Thank you ♥ it had been a while since I last wrote them, so yay for it to have worked =D

[emerald_embers]

Fabtastic :D. That whole segment of the anime/manga I just kept getting all flaily and distressed for them because it must have been so tough, and this handles it so brilliantly, the way Yukito doesn't entirely know what's going on but he knows something's a bit wrong and tries to hide his worries about it, while Touya stays all strong and silent but really concerned, and oh.

Love the way the naughtiness was understated. It works so well with a pairing like this :D, where they're so comfortable around one another that if they're not established already you can imagine them suddenly becoming established with no effort at all.

Love it :). Love it loads. *hugs*

(And the use of Yukito's bad eyesight? Extra love!)

[allira_dream]

It is painfully heart-squeezing, isn't it? Those eps/chapters... I think what really breaks me is that image of Touya holding Yukito after he collapses in New Year, he's so... desperate there that it's just SO heartbreaking and lovely. And since it's CLAMP, it could've gone wrong in less than .3 pages.

Thank you! This was one of the pieces I was the most worried about being unable to properly convey them since they sort of are one of Those Couples, you know?

Thank you for reading! ♥

[tekalynn]

*sob!*

This is lovely.

[allira_dream]

Thanks!

[daniela_lynx]

It has been years since the last time I read anything related to CCS, and you worked wonders to bring back reaaaaally good memories for me 8D Touya/Yukito was my first anime OTP! And this is beautiful. You work the details so well. Like Yuki's glasses. I love how you used that XD

Hot and sweet. And it hurts, but it's a good kind of hurt. *thumbs up* ;w;

[allira_dream]

I've been getting back unto my CLAMP roots lately, but yesssss, Touya/Yukito.

And the glasses *dorks about them*

Thank you, honey! ♥