Incense (FullMetal Alchemist, Roy/Riza, T)

[vastate]

Title: Incense
Author: Vastate
Rating: T
Warnings: Mentions of violence
Word count: 3,355
Summary: She burned through his senses, like fire.
A/N: My title is so punny. In-sense. Written for the prompt: "Roy/Riza: UST- Burn, baby, burn."

Comments

[veleda_k]

That was really impressive. There was so much intensity, both in their desire for each other, and the sensations you described. You're writing is incredibly vivid.

[cornerofmadness]

I really loved how you wove all the senses into this. The burning of her back and blind were the two best scenes, great emotion in them.

[evil_little_dog]

Absolutely beautiful. I love your imagery in the final scene, and how you actually wound up the story.

[sonjajade]

I loved the tension between them at the end, so beautiful and painful at the same time. Well done!