Selfish (Ashura/Yasha, RG Veda, PG)

[transient_words]

Prompt: RG Vega, Ashura/Yasha: clinging - don't disappear too.

Word Count: 467

Warning(s): brackets, present tense, a somewhat not so fluff piece (sorry, OP!). Self-edited. I avoid using pronouns when it comes to Ashura, so the writing is a bit /:

Notes: No idea what this is. I meant for this to be fluffy, but I fail at fluff, sorry D:

Comments

[transient_words]

Gosh your icon XDDD

So true!

Thank you. I wasn't expecting to get feedback this quickly since RG Veda is a sadly underappreciated manga D:

I always felt that it would take a while for Ashura to cope with the events. And I feel that Yasha is just as dependent on Ashura as Ashura is on him (but the ending showed that nicely, imo).

[transient_words]

I know what you mean. I love RG Veda too and tried to find fic, but found very little D: Far too little, imo.

[awakenyourfaith]

Wonderful job :) You captured the essence of their relationship, as well as their characters, very beautifully ♥

[transient_words]

Thanks <3. I'm glad you think so -- this was my first RG Veda fic.

[nanonaneko]

Thank you for writing RG Veda ;_; And writing it well, at that. Good job with the pronouns too; a lot of people struggle with pronouns for Ashura. It was done smoothly. I didn't really notice any aforementioned "/:"-ness about it :D

[transient_words]

Thank you for commenting!

As I said in another comment, I wasn't expecting this to get any feedback, and I'm really glad you reviewed <3

I did try to do this series justice, though it's a complex and definitely hard to write for. Ah, yes I've seen people struggle with those too -- so I decided to just stick to the name.

Thanks again!

[thousandbirds]

Absolutely lovely. I always wondered how these two will live on.

[transient_words]

Hmm, I admit I did too.

I'm glad this worked for you!

Thanks :)