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Always [Yami no Matsuei, Tsuzuki/Hisoka, PG-13]

Feb 05, 2011 20:30

Title: Always.
Author/Artist: Arizonaicerose (Sakurasango)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: look at the prompt, some swearing
Prompt: Yami no Matsuei, Tsuzuki/Hisoka: hurt/comfort - if everyone else goes away / I will stay
Word count: 1275

( “You really think they like you,” the whisper slides along Hisoka’s ear like a viper poising for an attack, dangerous and deadly in a small package. )

arizonaicerose, yami no matsuei

Comments 2

laurose8 February 7 2011, 04:28:15 UTC

Thank you for a bit of Yami no Matseui.

I liked the dismissal of Muraki as a figment of imagination (especially if he was the real Muraki!) And weaving in Tsuzuki's cooking and future nightmares into the end, so it doesn't get over fluffy.

measuringlife October 4 2011, 15:43:18 UTC

Awww, this is a really sweet piece! The creepy part was a good depiction of Muraki, and the Tsuzuki part was really sweet and heartwarming.

There were a couple of broken sentences, though.

here: Part of him wants to sleep forever, Hisoka is tired of living- both in the past life and in this one,

and here: What was the chant? Huffing Hisoka narrows his eyes, trying again to