Chemicals Attract (Tatsumi/Watari, Yami No Matsuei, PG)

Sep 03, 2010 04:18

Author: transient_words

Word Count: 2107

Warning(s): Fluff? Silliness? Weird characterisation? Mentions of (past and one-sided) Tatsumi/Tsuzuki. At points, this can qualify as crack. 
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Self-edited. One line taken from Fight Club, of all things.

Prompt: Yami no Matsuei, Tatsumi/Watari: seduction - Tatsumi was pretty sure this counted as seduction, or at least ( Read more... )

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transient_words September 3 2010, 17:59:19 UTC
I really love you, you know? And I'm sorry for the full-blown angst yesterday - I really just wanted some feedback/critique/whatever for this ._.

I have to admit that I never actively shipped them, though I like their interactions. So, writing this was a challenge, seeing how this was my first ever contact with the pairing 8D

Perhaps, my fault for taking on such a prompt?

I always liked Watari too - he showed a surprising amount of depth in the manga?

Glasses are attractive 8D - they make you look intelligent too.

Oh, I agree with you on the transition - and will admit that this not my smoothest writing. I was trying to write simpler, but ended up being bland at points? That sentence seems odd when you point it out - like a summary nearly XD.

And I thank you for pointing it out - it's definitely something I can work on :)

Thank you <333

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transient_words September 3 2010, 23:00:56 UTC
I feel a bit better, even managed to write a drabble XD. Which I see, um, as progress - I haven't written much this week.

Thanks, dear. Though I'll probably not write them again D:

I know! I think something of an underestimated character, but then the anime didn't really flesh him out ):

YES. And not geeky/nerdy as some people seem to think.

Definitely. I still need to get a hang out of it, seeing how I used to write long sentences - but wait, wasn't that quite a while ago 8D? I admit that I was also lazy with this fic ;_;

<3

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