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The Plan [Bleach, Renji/Ichigo , NC-17, July 22nd]

Aug 07, 2010 16:46

Title: The Plan
Author: nerdowl
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU
Prompt: July 22nd: Bleach, Renji/Ichigo: conman!AU - They were right when they said petty theft would escalate to grand larceny, but it wasn't the immorality of it that was bothering Renji. It was that he would rather do time than partner up with Crazy Kurosaki again.
Word count:6,334
Summary: When ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

nmhotel21 August 7 2010, 20:30:29 UTC

I really like this story, you really did a lot in few words without making everything seem to rushed. Everyone felt pretty much in character and you introduced and resolved many conflicts in a short amount of time. This story is very interesting and would be great as a longer piece if you had time to expand it.

Like everything else the sex scene was short, but also like the rest of the story it was well told. This was an extremely fun read.^_^

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nmhotel21 August 7 2010, 21:02:29 UTC

Thats a ton of stuff... 0_o Perfectly understandable why it wasn't longer.

Thanks for taking so many prompts then, and I can't wait so see more of your writing. =)

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spikykun August 11 2010, 13:24:31 UTC

OH, HOW I LOVE YOU.
This fic was fucking awesome! The pace was quick, which in this case worked (though I agree with nmhotel, it would be even better expanded), and god, you made me laugh so hard during their little insults. And I have to say--their clever plan was brilliant! I was so proud they've actually pulled it off :D
Plus, their relationship was very cute in this XD
And oh! The twists! With Isshin *cries* and their back stories! It was really interesting!

AND WHO CARES ABOUT ANYTHING ELSE, YOU DID THE CONMAN!AU AND I ADORE YOU. ♥