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Dizzy (Samurai Deeper Kyo, AkiraxBenitora, R)

Mar 01, 2010 20:55

Title: Dizzy
Author: silver_magess
Rating: R
Warning(s): Mentions of arousal and violence
Prompt: March 1st, Samurai Deeper Kyo, Benitora/Akira: arguing, tussling, accidental stimulation, first time - If your heart is nowhere in it / I don't want it for a minute.
Word count: 509
( stabbing Benitora was out of the question (or rather, it was too much trouble) )

silver_magess, samurai deeper kyo

Comments 5

mereprototype March 2 2010, 03:39:13 UTC

Nice moment of tension between them, although I would've liked to see it go even further than that.

silver_magess March 3 2010, 05:55:39 UTC

Thanks. And I one day, I do have to take something further with these two.

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silver_magess March 3 2010, 05:55:58 UTC

Typical teenager, isn't he?

chomiji March 3 2010, 03:53:49 UTC

Yay! I like what you did with the prompt!

I'm not sure who came off worse in this ... at least Benitora knew what he wanted!

silver_magess March 3 2010, 05:58:05 UTC

Thank you.

I'd almost say knowing what he wanted makes it worse, but at least Benitora is resilient.