Happy Spring maxine_chan!

[nickelodeon]

Title: Fuji's Guide to Falling
Recipient's name: Maxine-chan (maxine_chan)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Implied Fuji/Mizuki/Yuuta, emphasis on the YuuMi. Overall this is mostly platonic; the 'cest-squeamish need not fear.
Disclaimer: One-line reference to a character from another series (listing which would spoil the surprise). At any rate, I don't own that

Comments

[numisma]

Thanks, Marks. ♥

[solanum_d]

I love Yuuta and Mizuki and I love the Fuji kyoudai relationship, so I was super happy to see them included here. Yuuta's one of my favorite characters and you've really portrayed him well. He's fantastic and grouchy and loving and cute. It made me smile to read.

[numisma]

Thanks, Sol. Yuuta's a favorite of mine as well so I'll take any excuse to write him. Say, mind if I friend you? *_*

[solanum_d]

^_^ Yuuta is love. Absolutely, friend away. ♥

[meritjubet]

*grins* "Your grumpy look is so adorable. Are you in the mood for a match?" Ah, Fuji, you do have a way with worda that makes me smile.

I loved Yuuta's POV, how you expressed his feelings and his turmoils. His flail-yness at the end was very enjoyable to read and even as he squirmed because of the situation that must have been, something I think was amusing to read - from a distance ;)

The end was so sweet, I'm not sure how to say it, but Yuuta sees something in both Fuji and Mizuki, something that he likes and I liked how you expressed that. :)

P.S Loved the Death Note reference as well!

[numisma]

You have no idea how surprised and flattered I was to see you comment on this. It was like a creepy yet pleasant coincidence. Thanks so much! ♥

[meritjubet]

Well, thanks, I'm glad you were inspired. I was reading through spring_fluff's entries and I clicked on this one and read on missing the author notes and I thought it sounded familiar *grins* then I read the author notes and it made sense. I kind of guessed it was you from that ;)

Creepy but pleasant... like Light :)

[cedony]

I absolutely loved this fic. There was wonderful interaction amongst the three of them, and it's always fun to see Yuuta in between his brother and Mizuki, especially when it's been written so well, like this one.

I also loved that you chose this point in the manga timeline to focus on, because it was such a pivotal point for Fuji and Yuuta's relationship! And I really loved being taken through the Shiraishi x Fuji match through the eyes of Mizuki! So much win!

GREAT FIC!

♥

[numisma]

Orien! Rawr! ♥ I'm sorry you were MIA at the time I'd needed it beta written but like we discussed earlier, man, wasn't it worth the wait? ^_^ And I can't begin to thank you for the outline brainstorming back in January. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥