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[nickelodeon]

Title: Sweet the Sting
Recipient's name: For the lovers, the dreamers and me.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Momoshiro/Kaidoh
Summary: Momo decides it's Kaidoh's fault; after all, he started it.
Word Count: ~3850
Author's notes: You have no idea how thrilled I was to get your request. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thank you

Comments

[alice_and_lain]

This story has so many great moments that I can't decide between them all. Momo and Kaidoh were so fantastically done and I love the whole vehicle of bees and allergies.

He wonders if Kaidoh would die if he got stung and thinks maybe he'll ask Inui-senpai about it tomorrow, that is, if Inui-senpai is feeling talkative and has recovered from the "silver seat". Davide kept saying that his silence seemed fishy.

*laughs and laughs and laughs* I'm so easily amused.

[happiestwhen]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the pun. I kind of had you in mind when I stuck it in there. ;) ♥

[reddwarfer]

I thought I'd left a review earlier, but I hadn't. This is just brilliant. Momo is perfect and the fighting/kissing scenes are awesome. I love everything. It's funny and teenboyish and true to Momo and Kaidoh. *flails*

[happiestwhen]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you read and enjoyed. ♥♥

[reposoir]

*shifty eyes*

Okay, that probably slots into the category of one of my fav MomoKai fics I've yet read. The bee references, the water, the beach, Momo's voice (perfect, btw), Kaidoh's MOM, the hot factor of it all. Just...guh, yes.

I think Prillalar may have written this. I'm reminded very very strongly of her writing here, although the bee references make me think of Snoy or Garland too, but...

Yeah, this was good. I am impressed. :D

[happiestwhen]

Hee, your compliments always make me so happy. I was really blushing over the fact that I got you to enjoy MomoKai (and really flattered that you thought hal wrote this!). Thank you so much, Ociwen! ♥

[empath_eia]

DON'T THINK I MISSED THAT DAVIDE PUN. XD XD XD

I'm 99% certain you're someone I know. I'm terrible with identifying writing styles, but this is reaaalllyy familiar, so I'm sure I'll be kicking myself when you're revealed.

Anyway. I loved how very teenaged they were in this. The fact that they're hormonal, naive, kind-of-dumbassed kids is really inescapable in this, and that impresses me since the tendency in PoT-fic that I've seen is to age them up mentally to make it easier. Awesome job. ♥

[happiestwhen]

Awww, thank you so much! I love it best when they're just boys, too. I'm really glad you enjoyed them here. ♥♥

[shikishi]

Aw. Momo-pie. Finally realizing that burgers aren't an appropriate outlet for sexual exploration.

:D

Lovely fic, anon-san

[happiestwhen]

Thank you! Momo/burger will always be my secret otp. XD ♥