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On Equal Terms [1/1]

Oct 17, 2009 02:45

Title: On Equal Terms
Author: sppandachan
Rating: PG-13
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Russia. China. Mentions of: America, Lithunia, Ukraine, Belarus, Latvia, Estonia, Poland and the Asians in a general sense. / RussiaxChina. Though RussiaxChinaxRussia might be more accurate. XDDDDDD
Warnings: Implied Sex. Russia kinda being a bit of a creeper not that that's ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fandom: axis powers hetalia, *normal, character: russia, character: china

Comments 12

infiniteowl October 17 2009, 08:34:24 UTC

I have to admit, I didn't think that my Russia/China prompt would be filled as my second prompt was for a much more popular pairing. So I was thrilled when I saw that you had actually filled that prompt. Russia/China's actually not my #1 OTP, but lately it's been rising up through my ranks of numerous Hetalia OTPs at alarming speed and this fic pretty much summed up why I like Russia and China together so much. I really do like to think of Russia as treating China differently from the other nations, and nonrapist!Russia is always a welcome read.

Just having "after-bed" scenes is perfectly fine; I like the warm afterglow feeling that you kind of get from this fic that makes Russia and China really feel like a couple. Russia did seem to be lost in thought for an awfully long time here, but I really appreciate that you followed the part of my prompt that asked for a relatively equal Russia/China relationship. <3 ( ... )

sppandaaa October 17 2009, 18:02:06 UTC

I am referring to the USxUK one. And no pressure at all. I just really love the prompt. <3 <3 <3

xblkdragonx October 17 2009, 08:38:11 UTC

I...just died. I LOVED THIS!!! The way you delved into their psyche, the atmosphere...guh I dunno, but it captivated me! Please do write more >_

sppandaaa October 17 2009, 18:04:01 UTC

Thank you~ >/////<
It makes me so happy to hear that since you are one of my fav RoChu writers <3 <3 <3

meg_inatree October 17 2009, 13:30:18 UTC

This is gorgeous. The mood, Russia's daydreaming and remembering, China's curt but politeness, him not actually being weak and yeah, the general mood of this whole piece. I'm definitely gunna be finding more of your work.

Small mistake that I saw. Not a huge thing, you've just accidentally switch who's saying what around.

"Aiyaah, what am I going to do with you, aru?" Russia asked.

"I could think of a couple of things," China replied.

Hope you don't mind me point that out ^//^

sppandaaa October 17 2009, 17:03:51 UTC

Pft, I always miss something. Thanks for pointing it out. *goes to edit*

firebird_88 October 17 2009, 17:54:31 UTC

Very cute! I adore the interactions between the two, it really brings out the 3-D part of their personality rather than Ivan just being a creep and Yao being a hyperactive Hello Kitty lover. xDDD Great use of imagery, you can really imagine them having this sort of pillow talk on a nice morning. 83

sppandaaa October 17 2009, 20:20:15 UTC

Great use of imagery

I never get told that. I am so happy right now. XDDDDDD

boruframu October 17 2009, 19:32:11 UTC

YTL, China. Seriously.
This fic was really beautiful. Like, I mean... I could feel the beauty. It's really dreary here right now, but I felt like it was sunny and warm after reading this.
I couldn't help but smile the whole time, too. I loved it. Thank you for sharing it with me. <3

sppandaaa October 17 2009, 20:19:30 UTC

<3 <3 <3
Thanks for making me melt into goo for like the 4th time today. XDDDDD