Every Second Counts, Ch. 1

[sportsmed14]

Comments

[tdnk64]

Love this!!! Chapter two please??

[sportsmed14]

Aw, thanks so much for the reply! I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. Ch. 2 should be posted later this week or during the weekend some time. :D

[zbyszko]

Very intriguing start! Looking forward to more.

[sportsmed14]

Thanks for reading and for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. *hug*

[jenny_stanage]

love it can't wait for chapter 2 ;)

[sportsmed14]

Thanks Jen. Glad you enjoyed the first chapter! :D

[marsalka]

ok, I'm hooked and waiting for chap 2 :)

[sportsmed14]

I'm glad the first chapter hooked you. :P Thanks for reading and for the review!

[chazper]

I love this, sportsmed. I was a fan of the Lindsay-Ryan relationship (at least until she started putting her father first), and I think you captured her voice completely. The way you set up their reunion is perfect, but not where you ended this chapter! What a way to whet our appetite and worry us! It's not fair to stop here and leave us waiting for more. I hope you already have the chapter written and will post it soon.

Tomorrow will be good.

[sportsmed14]

Aw, thanks so much for the lovely comment! *hugs* I'm glad you feel I was able to capture her voice and that you liked how I set up her reunion with Ryan. *_*

Yes, I was feeling evil *evil laugh* and decided to leave flisters with sort of a cliff hanger. :P

Most of Ch. 2 is written, but there were a lot of things I wanted to change or add so hopefully I'll post it by the weekend. I'll try to! Sorry for the wait and thanks again for reading!