Oh my gosh. This is perfection. Honestly, I think I need to donate more money or something, haha.
I loved so much about this. The characterizations, the dialogue. It seemed so real, and it brought back a lot of memories of a few nights I've had with friends, the ones where you drink and stay awake and keep moving into the early morning because you don't want it to end. It rings so true and you tell the story so well.
Fantastic, really, really fantastic. Thank you so, so much!!!
i'm so glad you liked it!!! and ha yeah there are deeeefinitely some nights in (occasionally hazy) memory that informed the feel of this for sure. thanks so much for letting me know you liked it in such a thoughtful way <3
Bittersweet really is the best way to describe this story. I love how they kept teetering on the edge of something bigger but never actually gave in. But ultimately the drunk scenes at the party were the best. Best time ever. ♥ ♥ ♥
haha yes, the drunk scenes were a real blast to write. the fandom needs more drunk kradam, i feel this strongly. & thank you so much for leaving such a specific & sweet comment ♥
This was pretty amazing. I love stories that read like a steam of consciousness (Sp?) . Like a never ending thought that streams from place to place but with purpose. The kind of story that makes you sigh at the end with content because it was beautiful but also with discontent because you desire for more.
ahh this comment makes me so happy - there were definitely moments i worried about it maybe seeming too shapeless, so it's so great to hear you didn't think so. thanks so much for telling me <3
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I loved so much about this. The characterizations, the dialogue. It seemed so real, and it brought back a lot of memories of a few nights I've had with friends, the ones where you drink and stay awake and keep moving into the early morning because you don't want it to end. It rings so true and you tell the story so well.
Fantastic, really, really fantastic. Thank you so, so much!!!
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I love how they kept teetering on the edge of something bigger but never actually gave in.
But ultimately the drunk scenes at the party were the best. Best time ever. ♥ ♥ ♥
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