Fic: Nevermore

[spoons1899]

Title: Nevermore
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean (it could be Sam/Dean depending on your perspective)
Rating: R
Word Count: 5,000
Summary: Mystery Spot coda. If Fate continues getting its jollies by kicking the crap out them like it’s done their whole lives and Dean does end up taking a permanent vacation downstairs, then Sam is… well Sam is going

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

Killed me. I am absolutely dead from the emotion of this

[spoons1899]

Awwww, thanks!

I'm really glad you picked out the lines where Dean describes the future he wants for Sam and where he says he hates things that are ironic because those were some of my favorites to write.

[hsifeng]

God, what these boys go through for each other just cuts to the bone. It's true, I love the angst, but only when it is well done.

Your's is perfection honey. ;)

And that right there is the problem. Because while spending what seems like six months trapped in some fucked up reality where your brother is dead and you’re- judging by what Sam said and the whole demon blood thing and the Winchester propensity towards manic vengeance- some sort of psycho vigilante is enough to mess anyone up, Sam’s reaction is clearly more than that. Sam wouldn’t be screaming “I couldn’t save you” at Dean if he wasn’t afraid the entire thing was going to repeat itself in less than four months time.

[spoons1899]

Thanks dear!

Want to hear something goofy? When Dean said in some ways it’s really fucking annoying because he’s twenty-eight years old now and it’s a little difficult to maneuver around with a giant Sasquatch plastered to his back. I definitely wrote it the first time with an 'm' instead of an 's' and didn't even noticed until like the third proof-reading.

[hsifeng]

I like your goofy.... *winks*

(And really, I wasn't trolling Deviant art the other day, trying to find someone to con into making me my 'Samsquatch' image....Really...)

whistles a nervous tool and looks suspiciously guilty

In all honestly, thinking about this silly project has infected me at random points throughout the past two weeks.

If only I could draw worth a damn…

[geckoholic]

Oh, OUCH. But ins such a good way.

This:
“You shouldn’t litter.”
Almost made my heart miss a beat. *sniffles*

Also, a well-written Mystery Spot - coda with cuddling is never not going to be WIN.

[medea34]

this broke me a little bit. I think mystery spot really was the beginning of sam's slide. I have wanted THIS scene since then.

[sandymg]

Mystery Spot is one of those perfect episodes. This coda totally did it justice. Very nicely told. Beautiful language. And excellent Dean voice.