Fic: Bestowal (PG)

[yami_no_kaiba]

Title: Bestowal
Author: Yami no Kaiba
Beta: ntjnke
Fandom: Star Trek: TOS
Rating: PG (for naughty words)
Pairing: Spock/McCoy
Length: 2,772 words

Summary: Spock gets a present.
Disclaimers: I do not own the characters or the concepts of Star Trek in any of its forms.
Note: post-Yesteryear (From the Animated Series.)

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Comments

[ivy_warlord08]

You made McCoy give Spock a sehlat fanged teddy bear.

You are made of WIN.

[yami_no_kaiba]

*blushes and grins* Thanks. Spock gets all sorts of presents in fandom: tribbles, kitties, stuffed hedgehogs, fanged teddy bears...

Spock is a magnet for fluffy cute things. ^_^

[thenefarius]

I want a Sehbear as well. Too bad most people would think it's vampy bear.
:(

[ntjnke]

You know the answer to avoiding the misunderstandings, don't you?

BIGGER FANGS

[yami_no_kaiba]

Ah, but when do they stop being fangs, and start being tusks?? *ponders this silly, useless question*

Despite teddy bear proportions, the fangs should always be six inches long! XD

[yami_no_kaiba]

*flails when she sees icon* Eee! A Team Jones member! Continuing the clandistine, whirlwind affair between our Teams, are we?! ^_^

If you get a Sehbear, I demand to know the supplier! Because I want one too... *pouts*

Ehehehe... Yeah. All those Twilight fanatics... On the other hand, it might draw more fans to the greatness that is Trek. *ponders the pros and cons of this*

[ntjnke]

You posted it!

It's perfect now. I just got caught up in the story and read right to the end. And still "awwwwwed" when the bear was left on the bed!

Awesome job.

[yami_no_kaiba]

It's perfect now.

Oh God, am I glad you think so. When I was posting it at 4am, my hands shaking from fatigue, I was forced to hen-pecking the last few html tags. All I can say is thank God for Select All and Copy/Paste functions.

I just got caught up in the story and read right to the end. And still "awwwwwed" when the bear was left on the bed!

Excellent! As I have a pretty good memory for stories, and can't for the life of me re-read something with the same awe and giddiness as the first time unless its been years since the last time I picked it up, this is a pinnacle of praise for me. Thank you.

Awesome job.

I seriously couldn't have made it this awesome without you. It's tighter, and flows better, and doesn't give the reader a chance to stop and think 'Wait, what is this word suppposed to be? God, this grammar is crap. Why am I reading this again?' and thus totally fail at setting the mood and pace.

*GIVES YOU A HUGE HUG* THANK YOU!!!

[tprillahfiction]

Awe!!! this is perfect.

[yami_no_kaiba]

Hee. ^_^ I love how its making people feel the warm fuzzies.

[angelascats]

AW THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING I"VE EVER READ.

I leave I-Chaya in your care while I'm away.

Tee-hee!