Daddy opened his mouth, closed it, opened it again, like he didn't know what to say. Finally he shook his head and opened his arms. Dean walked into them, into the hug. He hoped that him having short hair would make things a little better. Daddy might not be so sad all the time.
He heard Sammy waking up, reaching for Dean automatically and making a quiet, confused noise when he didn't find him. He didn't want Sam to be upset, so he stepped away from Daddy, moving so that Sammy could see him.
"Right here, Sammy," he assured his baby brother.
Sam stared at him like he didn't recognize him. "Dean? Where's your hair?"
"I cut it."
"Why? Why'd you...why?" Sammy's eyes teared up. "You don't look like Dean! Put it back!"
"I can't, I cut it off."
"Don't like it! Put it back, you don't look right!" He was crying, shaking his head. "Make it long again!"
Dean looked at Daddy, who didn't seem any happier. He felt like crying himself. He hadn't made things better, he'd made them worse. Sammy was sad, and Daddy was frowning, he wasn't happy
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Awww! Oh so sad. I think Sammy's reaction might just be my favorite part. I can definitely see Sam being so young and demanding Dean to put it back thinking that his brother could. (Of course he could. Dean could do anything right?) This was great!
Yay, so glad you like it! :D I'm super self conscious about my writing, so hearing that people enjoy it is the best thing ever! :) Little Sammy is convinced that Dean is some sort of super hero, I'm sure. He thinks his big brother could do anything!
Don't feel negatively about your writing. It's good! I kinda wish there was a follow up to this years later where an older Sam (as in sometime during the series) remembers this or remembers Dean with longer hair. Maybe Dean gets sick and his hair grows out or Dean grows his hair out as a disguise against the Levis and it strikes a memory in Sam. Yes, I'm a sucker for schmoop. Can you tell? LOL
I'm always very nervous about my writing, wondering if people will think it's awful, or what. Can't help it, it's just how I am. Heh. :P Nothing wrong with that, I adore schmoop myself. I like sad stories, but the best kind are the ones that are so sweet and/or adorable I just melt into goo. O///O
*gross sobbing* that was so innocent and so sad for everyone! Dean, Sam, John and especially me! The way Sam demanded Dean to put it back was so perfect, exactly how a child would react because why couldn't you stick it back on after you cut it off? So adorable and thank you!
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He heard Sammy waking up, reaching for Dean automatically and making a quiet, confused noise when he didn't find him. He didn't want Sam to be upset, so he stepped away from Daddy, moving so that Sammy could see him.
"Right here, Sammy," he assured his baby brother.
Sam stared at him like he didn't recognize him. "Dean? Where's your hair?"
"I cut it."
"Why? Why'd you...why?" Sammy's eyes teared up. "You don't look like Dean! Put it back!"
"I can't, I cut it off."
"Don't like it! Put it back, you don't look right!" He was crying, shaking his head. "Make it long again!"
Dean looked at Daddy, who didn't seem any happier. He felt like crying himself. He hadn't made things better, he'd made them worse. Sammy was sad, and Daddy was frowning, he wasn't happy ( ... )
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Don't feel negatively about your writing. It's good! I kinda wish there was a follow up to this years later where an older Sam (as in sometime during the series) remembers this or remembers Dean with longer hair. Maybe Dean gets sick and his hair grows out or Dean grows his hair out as a disguise against the Levis and it strikes a memory in Sam. Yes, I'm a sucker for schmoop. Can you tell? LOL
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