SPN: "Last Will" by lizzypaul

May 20, 2008 12:36

Title: Last Will
Author: lizzypaul
Rating: PG
Pairing: Gen
Word Count: 945
Spoilers: Big for Mystery Spot and No Rest for the Wicked

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iamstealthyone May 21 2008, 03:09:40 UTC
Nicely done. I like that Sam just can’t bring himself to read that last letter. He’s so weary of losing his loved ones, and reading it is like admitting defeat. And Sam’s not at all ready to say goodbye.

Favorite lines:

“Your father was a good man. He always tried to do right by you boys.”

“He was a son of a bitch,” Sam says, voice harsh.

Bobby takes a long swig of his beer. “That too.”

I really like this little moment. It feels very true to them, especially Bobby agreeing with Sam’s statement. John was a complex character, I think, and you captured that nicely here.

There’s a letter, lying inside. Just one. It’s pink, with Hello Kitty stickers stuck all over it,

*g* Leave it to Dean to do this.

“Happy Birthday!” the card proclaims, and in the margins, Dean wrote, “Only the best for my little girl.”

And this is so very Dean, too. :)

Take care of yourself. Don’t do anything stupid, or I swear I will beat your ass. You're the only thing I ever did right. Don't throw that away. And then, written so sloppily and scrunched ( ... )

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lizzypaul May 21 2008, 05:27:08 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!

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murielle May 21 2008, 04:45:53 UTC
This is so ... SPN. It's so SPN I'm hurting, all over again.

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lizzypaul May 21 2008, 05:25:19 UTC
I really, really wanted to write something happy and cute and uplifting, but this...called to me. So. :(

Glad it rang true, though.

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coell May 21 2008, 05:01:41 UTC
Good story!

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lizzypaul May 21 2008, 05:21:13 UTC
Thank you!

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mtee May 21 2008, 20:18:01 UTC
Good story.
I love the Hello Kitty -- and the poignant line "You're the only thing I ever did right" ------ ah Dean....

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lizzypaul May 22 2008, 06:07:50 UTC
Thanks!

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yjlee79 May 23 2008, 03:34:04 UTC
Awee!! I love this story!! It's sad, but I love it.
After 3x16, I've seen many story to fill the hollow in my heart and yet...until I read this one. Although Dean is still not back, strangely, I feel comfort and hope.
I want to introduce this story on my blog written in Chinese, and I wonder if I could quote and translate it with your permission?
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.

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lizzypaul May 25 2008, 19:55:42 UTC
Thank you!

I want to introduce this story on my blog written in Chinese, and I wonder if I could quote and translate it with your permission?

Sure! That would be awesome. :)

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