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irnan September 8 2008, 13:48:42 UTC
Thanks very much! You know Dean ruled those two with an iron fist. IRON.

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anonymous September 8 2008, 17:42:15 UTC
Utterly. His adorableness would have defeated them from the start.

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apgeeksout September 8 2008, 00:27:10 UTC
I think you can still call this gen, though it is sexy as hell!

Deep deep in her gut where not even he will ever see, something twists and reaches out for that scent, for the smell of new places and the sight of the open road.

I love this line: haunted & longing & tense & yum!

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irnan September 8 2008, 13:50:36 UTC
Thank you! I don't think Mary ever really got rid of the occasional sense of being trapped in Lawrence. It wouldn't be like her to just settle down and always be perfectly happy.

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morganslady September 8 2008, 00:40:30 UTC
Mary's so mysterious,yet her outward joy in Dean is there for everyone to see.

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irnan September 8 2008, 13:50:50 UTC
Thank you!

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pheebs1 September 8 2008, 22:13:38 UTC
Aw. Dean ruled the roost with those two. :) Lovely piece.

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irnan September 9 2008, 19:06:40 UTC
As soon as Mary found out she was pregnant, their whole world shifted to center around him.

*nods*

Thanks very much!

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dotfic September 9 2008, 23:11:44 UTC
This is lovely, and I like the hint of Mary's story, what her life maybe was pre-John. Wonderful details and atmosphere.

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irnan September 16 2008, 06:30:31 UTC
Thank you very much! It's sort of part of a Mary!verse of mine but sort of not, and OMG does she ever own my brain.

*headdesk*

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