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Mar 26, 2008 21:10

Title: Released
Author: noirbabalon
Rating/Word Count: PG-13 / 507 words
( Summary: Written for Challenge #1 @ spn_xx : Released...but to where? )

wos gen flashfic challenge, challenge, flashfic, spn_xx, original characters, fic

Comments 2

dotfic March 28 2008, 23:18:42 UTC

Nicely done, I really liked the vivid imagery, and we haven't seen a lot from the POV of a spirit as the Winchesters banish one. Her confusion and fear came across well.

noirbabalon March 30 2008, 22:29:11 UTC

I think it was mainly my fear and confusion :-) about the whole writing process. I'm still not happy with the last paragraph. It was a last minute add and I wonder if using the word diaphanous twice was kind of twee or self indulgent, but couldn't resist the imagery.

It was doubly nice to receive your comments as I enjoy and admire your writing so much. Thank you! :-)