Hidden Mouths of Stone and Light, for chase_acow (Dean/OFC, NC-17)

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Title: Hidden Mouths of Stone and Light
Author: maboheme
Recipient: chase_acow
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Word Count: ~ 4,900
Summary: There’s only a beat, a moment’s indecision before she fires off the shot, and her life changes forever.

Author's Notes: Warnings for sexual situations/language. For chase_acow, from the prompt, Dean/Female!Hunter. Title and opening quote

Comments

[samescenes]

Oh, I really love this, the style that the whole this is written in. Beautiful :)

[nyoka]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the style :D

[azephirin]

I loved this. I like how Georgia grows into her own character, leaving her old life behind but keeping just a few parts of it (how to fire a gun; Dean). And I like the idea that this could have been going on the whole time: before the series started, and then in the background during the years that we know. I was wondering how you were going to end this, and as sad as it is, it makes perfect sense with the rest of the story.

[nyoka]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked Georgia, her growth and her journey. I'm glad the ending worked for you and it felt right with the rest of the story. Thank you again!

[chase_acow]

I really enjoyed this. I love the title, it fits in so well with them. I always have a hard time with titles.

Georgia is a neat character. I liked that she tried to make a place for herself in Georgia and she just couldn't fit. I wish hunters weren't so damn tragic, but then they wouldn't be half so compelling.

The ending is so sad!

[nyoka]

Thank you hon! So glad your enjoyed it. And yes, I think what makes hunters so appealing is that they are walking tragedy in so many ways. I hope the ending didn't turn you off too much. Again, glad you liked :)

[dramaphile]

Oh, oh, oh.

The last paragraph just kills me, absolutely. This is gorgeous, and I love the way it sort of circles back to where it started.

[nyoka]

*blushes* Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the circling and the last paragraph. It was tough to end it here, but that seemed to be the inevitable pull of the story. Thank you again:)

[joans23]

Such a strong and incredible woman, the kind you sort of want to be when you grow up ;) What an amazing piece of work!!

[nyoka]

Oh, yay, I'm so glad you liked Georgia. I definitely had a great time crafting her. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words. I'm so glad you liked this piece!