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Fic: Double or Nothing (Hellhound on My Trail)

Sep 06, 2009 17:15

Title: Double or Nothing (Hellhound on My Trail)
Author: extraonions
Recipient: stangerine88
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, Violence
Author's Notes: For the prompt, Sam makes a deal that frees Dean from Hell. What are the conditions? Thanks to c00kie for looking this over, to briarwood for being so patient with me on this pinch hit, and everyone else who let me generally annoy them ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

super_pan September 6 2009, 16:46:45 UTC

I liked that! Although I was worried there for a bit, that they were going to lose.

I thought your characterizations of the brothers were perfect, and your Lilith was as creepy and evil as on the show.

extraonions September 8 2009, 06:18:55 UTC

Thank you so much! It's especially nice to know that the characterization worked for you, and that Lilith came off creepy, which was exactly what I was aiming for. I'm happy you enjoyed the story! :)

stangerine88 September 7 2009, 04:09:13 UTC

Oh, after the day I've had at work, this was wonderful to come back to! Your Lilith is perfectly creepy and devious and the deals were clever too! Lilith would be tricky enough to make Sam the Hellhound Dean had to not only find, but escape as well.

Love the ending- they've just got to be fine! *is hopeful!*

I'd quote back my favourite parts but then I'd end up quoting the whole fic and LJ comments have a word limit!

Thanks so much! (I noticed you pinch-hitted for this! Which possibly make you even more awesome- coming up with something quick and clever!)

<3

extraonions September 8 2009, 06:22:39 UTC

Oh, good, I'm so happy you liked this! :) Alas, saying it's a pinch hit makes it sound like I turned it around super fast, but as the patient mods know, I was like the last struggling straggler!

I had hoped to expand a lot more on the concept (which originally was a lot more heavily steeped in the 'East of the Sun, West of the Moon' story, but the plot was eating me alive and I ended up having to cut about a year of Dean chasing after Sam to streamline things considerably). I was pretty pleased with how it came out in the end but I am very happy that you enjoyed it all the same :).

devilyouwere September 14 2009, 15:33:16 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you got this finished ♥ This was perfect. And your Lilith was amazing. Please write more of her!

You're description of the hell hound and of the deal and yeah--I just loved it. ♥

extraonions September 14 2009, 21:47:19 UTC

Aw, thank you so much, hun! :) I'm glad you liked it, and I'm super excited by how pretty much everyone who has commented has mentioned Lilith's characterization. That makes me very happy!

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extraonions September 21 2009, 20:14:41 UTC

Wow! Thanks for the kind words; high praise indeed! :) I'm really happy you enjoyed the story!

macbyrne October 1 2009, 02:07:26 UTC

I really enjoyed this, especially the different deals the boys were making. It's really heartbreaking what these two will do for each other, isn't it? Poor boys... Great job!

extraonions October 1 2009, 02:25:18 UTC

It is heartbreaking! I think Dean realized it at the end of S3 when he told Sam, no more deals (of course, Sam tried anyway). Those poor boys. I am really happy you enjoyed the story, and thank you for reading and commenting!