Fic: Let it Ride

Sep 06, 2009 05:22

Title: Let it Ride
Author: persnickett
Recipient: jargonelle
Rating: 14+
Warnings: none, strippers who don’t strip, mild language
Author's Notes: Here are the awesome prompts I got. Try to guess which one I used. :D ( Read more... )

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jargonelle September 6 2009, 11:42:50 UTC
Oh wow! This is fantastic - thank you for using my prompts so well! <3

You are really good at connecting details from the show together - John's yoda writing! - and the POV is really good. I am quite slow - even when I knew my own prompts, I didn't connect the 'Jessie' to Jess right away - but I grinned so hard when I finally figured it out and I love how this is a hopeful story for John and Dean, even as it makes Jess' story that much more tragic.

In conclusion: Eeeeeeeeeee! I was really happy and excited to read this! :)

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persnickett September 8 2009, 00:59:28 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad Jess was a surprise, I was hoping it would work out that way. :D
Thank you. <3

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roque_clasique September 6 2009, 16:17:20 UTC
That was great! Good job.

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persnickett September 8 2009, 00:59:44 UTC
Yay! Thanks.

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tabaqui July 18 2010, 04:36:53 UTC
Oh, boys. Damnit, John. I hate to think of them both gingerly stepping around and around Sam.
*sniffle*

But awesome working-in of Jess! And Dean and John in suits, working the high-roller angle. Wheeeee!

Fun stuff.

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persnickett July 18 2010, 11:03:57 UTC
Thanks so much, this story was a bit of a pain, but it was fun doing something different.

Yeah. tuxedo!John. Mmm. :)

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severina2001 March 30 2011, 22:30:59 UTC
Heee, what kills me about this is John being surprised that Dean is workin' the mojo with the ladies. Have you met Dean, John? ;)

And then of course Dean gets his first, best love at the end. :)

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persnickett March 31 2011, 01:28:09 UTC
Heee! Looks like now you've read all my stories. Thank you for all your comments. I wanted to reply to this one today though, because it figures you would read this while I was in Vegas! <3 I just *had* to respond from here. :D

TBH I'm not entirely sure John *has* met Dean. Not the Dean we know and love, anyhow.

YAY for Dean's first and best love! *rubs up against her just a little*

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