Fic: Under the Surface and Rising

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Title: Under the Surface and Rising
Author: embroiderama
Recipient: just_ruth
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: some violence and bad language
Author's Notes: Thank you to by as-yet-unnamed beta!
Summary: John gets a paying gig for the summer not long after Sam learns the truth about the supernatural. While Dean's off being a teenager, Sam worries about what might be waiting for

Comments

[musesfool]

Aw, boys. I love that Champ actually helped them out and saved Dean's life.

[embroiderama]

Thank you! I liked the idea of a benevolent sea monster. :)

[just_ruth]

Oh, this is marvelous! I love all the details and the fact that Sam's precognitive dreams may have started a little earlier than we've been led to believe.

I love Grace! She's cute and sassy.

The ending is spectacular. Thank you for this!

[embroiderama]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[just_ruth]

I am finding it hilarious that you got my prompts and I got yours. Want to be friends?

[embroiderama]

Absolutely! And it's odd, I've had it happen to me with a couple of challenges before--I'm glad it worked out so well! :)

[brigid_tanner]

Ooh, more, please! Want to know what's going on out there on the lake! Grace rocks. Like the way it was moving sorta slowly, like summer when you're a kid, until they go out on the lake. Loved Sam's observations of his family and how much he wants to help them.

[embroiderama]

Thank you so much!

[laurie_bug]

Oh, this is SO cool!

But you can't leave it there...we need a sequel, ASAP. Preferably from John's p-o-v, where he's conflicted about what to do with Champ (who deserves our undying affection for realizing Dean is way too pretty to be eaten), and worrying about his eldest, who gets a nice case of pneumonia from his misadventure.

(makes pleading puppy eyes)

[embroiderama]

Heee, those things are all very far up my alley, so it's possible but I'm not sure. Thanks!

[embroiderama]

Thank you!