The Master's House, for firealchemist1

Sep 04, 2019 15:13

Title: The Master's House
Recipient: firealchemist1
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: suicidal ideation/PTSD
Word Count: ~6500
Summary: Today is the first-ever Tuesday. Sam's been told there will be more.
Notes: The AU where Sam and Dean are angels at the dawn of the universe.

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themegalosaurus September 5 2019, 15:03:18 UTC
This was so good!! Like others have said, an origin myth for supernatural. I loved the loopiness of it, circling round things that were familiar and in their appearance both helped the story make sense and were given new meaning by the context you gave them. Sam's heart dropping at the loss of the sunset was so affecting to me?? Idk just so powerful. And I loved how recognisable your God was, the same irritating self satisfied faux benevolence, spot on

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kalliel October 16 2019, 13:19:52 UTC
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! It makes me happy that you enjoyed this. <333 Funnily, the whole fic was premised on this image I had of Sam contemplating the idea of Falling on purpose (or driving the Impala down to Earth, or whatever), and then realizing he might miss his wings--but only because now he'd seen birds, and had liked them on the bird. WHICH I THEN COMPLETELY FORGOT TO PUT IN THE FIC. OH WELL.

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marciaelena September 5 2019, 19:29:15 UTC
This has to be the most beautiful thing I've ever read. The truest one, too.

I'm in awe. And I'm crying, because it hurts. But that's how it should be.

Thank you. ♥

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kalliel October 16 2019, 13:13:28 UTC
Thank you so much!!!! <333333

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finchandsparrow September 7 2019, 03:49:50 UTC
This is breathtaking. Literally. I found this not only beautiful, but deeply, deeply affecting. I've cried twice and I know I'm going to cry the next time I read it, too. I'm gonna have a lot more to say and will comment more later (obviouslyyyyy <333333) but I just.

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kalliel October 16 2019, 13:10:22 UTC
Thank you sooooo much, bb!! That really means a lot to me. <333 I think we had similar feelings upon turning in our stories this year, haha.

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tifaching September 7 2019, 19:25:18 UTC
I don't even know what to say about this imaginitive, heartbreaking and beautifully crafted story. Sam the thinker/rememberer/reader of tablets and Dean the tortured weapon, mygod, so perfect. And Zachariah, my favorite evil angel and Castiel and God and 1967 and Tuesdays and just EVERYTHING. Fairly sure I know who you are, but in case I'm wrong, mystery writer, I look forward to devouring your stories. Thank you for this wonder.

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kalliel October 16 2019, 13:09:46 UTC
Thank you, bb!! <333 AND OF COURSE I HAD TO BRING BACK ZACHARIAH! Zachariah and Uriel, my maaans.

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zara_zee September 10 2019, 08:58:00 UTC
Oh. Brilliant. Just utterly beautiful. The things you've built with words here...my heart is as thoroughly taken as Sam's. <3

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kalliel October 16 2019, 13:09:01 UTC
Thank you!! <3333

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