Heaven for Beginners, for jennytork

Aug 28, 2014 08:00

Title: Heaven for Beginners
Recipient:jennytork
Word count: 3000
Rating: PG just to be safe
Warnings: Brief mention of Hell

Author's Notes: A big thanks to reapertownusa for the encouragement and the speedy beta! This is my first SPN fic, so constructive criticism is welcome!

Summary: For the prompt: Slice of life fic with the brothers -- in between hunts, what is ( Read more... )

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anactoria August 28 2014, 23:33:53 UTC
This feels very them. And I loved the possessed cow thing, ngl. ;)

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kribban October 26 2014, 13:10:51 UTC
Thanks! And I loved it too, 900 pounds versus what, 200 pounds? Sam is sure to feel like ground beef for a while.

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majestic_duxk August 29 2014, 01:32:08 UTC
ah - I liked this, kind bitter sweet, with a really gentle feel about it. and I LOVED the bit about Master Chef Australia (but I have a soft spot for all of them and love George, and Matt with his cravats, and Gary).

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kribban October 26 2014, 13:12:58 UTC
Thanks! My best friend is a huge Masterchef Australia fan and have spent countless hours showing me episodes. The judges are all wonderful! (And so different from the judges in American Idol type shows.)

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absenthe_wrae August 29 2014, 03:09:34 UTC
Nicely done, I enjoyed reading it, the pacing was really gentle, the dialogue spot on, and all the little details... <3

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kribban October 26 2014, 13:13:33 UTC
Thank you!

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zana_zira August 29 2014, 04:29:37 UTC
kribban October 26 2014, 13:20:15 UTC
The ending is inspired by Every Man Has His Own Story by yohkobennington from last year's exchange, but with the characters reversed.

Thank you for your kind word!

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madebyme_x August 29 2014, 16:38:11 UTC
What a beautifully quiet and gentle slice of life fic - I thoroughly enjoyed every word of it!

You captured Sam's POV perfectly. I really enjoyed hearing him thinking about non-supernatural things like how to take mental vacations and how waitresses must see him. It was also great to see the boys do everything things like go grocery shopping, paint walls and run out of milk!

I loved how you focused on Sam being reluctant to call the bunker home, and how easily Dean has taken to it. And the ending was perfect - bittersweet, but still full of hope.

I hope this is the first of many SPN fics I see from you dear anon! This was wonderful. Thank you for sharing :)

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kribban October 26 2014, 13:47:53 UTC
Thank you! I was very inspired by last year's story Every Man Has His Own Story by yohkobennington for the ending.

It breaks my heart that Sam doesn't see the bunker as his home on the show, but I have hopes he'll come around.

It definitely won't be the last fic, Summergen was such an awesome place to start. :)

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