And they tell me you are wicked for sistabro

Aug 25, 2011 16:38

Title: And they tell me you are wicked
Author: dayadhvam_triad
Recipient: sistabro
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language, reference to gore
Author's Notes: Thanks to K for looking over this, and to sistabro for the opportunity to play with awesome prompts!-I used #3 (Chicago stock yards) but drew inspiration for tone&atmosphere from #1 (Stephen King’s Wolves of the Calla quote). ( Read more... )

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roque_clasique August 26 2011, 00:01:46 UTC
Wow, this was haunting and beautiful and sad.

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dayadhvam_triad September 8 2011, 02:57:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. :) Thank you!

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elliemurasaki August 26 2011, 01:13:55 UTC
*cries*

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dayadhvam_triad September 8 2011, 02:57:37 UTC
♥ /hug

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sistabro August 26 2011, 13:59:52 UTC
I am sorry I could not comment until today; trust this to go up on the day I happen to spend in transit :P

That said, OMG <333333333333333333333333333

The atmosphere is just lovely and melancholy and bitter. Oh, Sam, so so bitter.

Over the years, he had grown worse at lying to himself. Yes, yes, yes. Disillusioned at the end of the world. That whole conversation, dead meat jfkdjask, was just fucking brilliant. Set the stage, the desolation, the ruin, but the warning freely given, a sign that decency still flickered around the edges, that all is not madness yet.

DISASSEMBLY LINE! ALL THE BONUS POINTS TO YOU. Seriously, I just love that phrase. <3

Oh, god, the dream. They are so happy and you've always been able to do so much broke my heart into pieces.

As did this: A drop of blood fell on his forehead, but he didn’t blink-stared through the ghost right at the ceiling, the plaster cracked and slowly broached by mold. Jess was no longer there. OMG CALLBACK OF AWESOMENESS AND HEARTBREAK ;_;

too late to save anything, to see him ( ... )

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dayadhvam_triad September 8 2011, 03:02:57 UTC
:DDDDDDDDDD

I am so glad you liked it! All the time the story was stewing in my head I was going, "Sam ;___; Sam ;_____; Saaaam ;__________;" So. :( The world of croatverse is such a miserable place and yet I felt that all human decency could not possibly be lost. ♥

JESS. Just--Jess.

<3333333333333

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superbadgirl August 27 2011, 20:51:38 UTC
Wow.

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dayadhvam_triad September 8 2011, 03:06:05 UTC
Thanks!

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User sistabro referenced to your post from August spn_summergen Recs! saying: [...] reveals and all the prompts go up Sept 1st. *is excited* Title: And they tell me you are wicked [...]

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