Rocks Fall (Everyone Dies) for ratherastory

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Title: Rocks Fall (Everyone Dies)
Author: cherie_morte
Recipient: ratherastory
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language and Temporary Injury
Author's Notes: Written for the following prompt: "Sam and Dean are dealing with a run-of-the-mill hunt in an abandoned mine when everything goes south, in a big way. Something (up to the author) causes a cave-in, trapping one or both

Comments

[onechairleft]

This was so good! I really miss Whiny!Sam, now, though. :D

Loved the little details mentioned in previous comments- very lovely use of smell/scent, which is something a lot of authors don't do well. Perfect balance of snark and concern between the boys and overall, just well written.

Plus, cave trolls, FTW! (And don't get me started on the genius that is the title!)

[cherie_morte]

Hahaha, I recently rewatched early seasons and it left me so nostalgic for bitchy!Sam. Glad I could provide a little of that for you. :D

[mimblexwimble]

This made me all nostalgic for the earlier seasons. I love the banter! Wonderful job!

[cherie_morte]

Hee! Thanks so much, BB, thanks for reading!

Oh yay!

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[marlowe78]

What a lovely return to simpler times. Well done, really a nice idea how the got out. I was secretly thinking that maybe Dean found a hidden passageway behind the eggs, but this works much bett :-D

[cherie_morte]

I was banging my head on (cave?) walls trying to figure out how they got out of this one myself! Luckily it all clicked into place eventually. So glad you thought it worked!

[werty30]

This story was so much fun to read! Crisp and vivid, like a good comic book.

[cherie_morte]

So glad you enjoyed it!