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The Vines Around My Heart for scorpiod1

Feb 05, 2010 23:14

Author/Artist: little_missmimi
Recipient: scorpiod1
Rating: R
Warnings: None that I can think of.
Pairing: girl!Sam/Jess
Summary: Jess says, "You look so beautiful," and sometimes it still seems too good to be true.
Notes: Thanks to familiardevil for looking it over. ( Let vines grow till there is no more room to move. )

character: jessica lee moore, rating: r, character: girl!sam winchester, pairing: jessica/girl!sam, # fanfiction

Comments 14

meiou_set February 6 2010, 06:06:31 UTC

This broke my heart at the end, but it was beautiful. I love how you captured the progression of their relationship.

little_missmimi February 11 2010, 04:57:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, even if it made you sad.

scorpiod1 February 6 2010, 07:59:48 UTC

OMG, MIMI! *SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* OMG *FLAILS SO HARD* I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WERE WRITING FOR MEEEEEEE :D AND IT IS SO, SO LOVELY.

OKAY, I love your opening, the whole "guys don't like girls who can kick their ass" and Sam sticking a knife in her boot! EEEEEEE!

And I love Jess and Sam's meeting, and the dangerous curves description and the "I didn't mean to insult your beer" is soo cute.

AND JESS IS SO SWEEET AND TAKES SAM HOOOOOME AND HER PINK ROOM! AND I LOVE HOW THEIR RELATIONSHIP DEVELOPS. AND SAM THOUGHT JESS WAS OUT OF HER LEAGUE! SAMMMMY. I love her! <33333 And I giggle at Sam can't cook, heeee!

AND OH GOD, HOW MUCH DO I LOVE THE SCENE IN THE LINGERIE STORE? A LOT! It's sweet and adorable and I love how nervous Sam is but JESS IS SO SWEET AND GOOD TO HER. And the I love you at the end is just perfect.

ALSO, the sex was pretty hot. And the camisole. Jess, unf :D

And the ending made me sad. Oh Sam, that's heartbreaking. Their time is running out. *snuggles them both*

little_missmimi February 12 2010, 05:58:30 UTC

I'm thrilled that you love it! This was the third idea I'd tried writing, and I'm really happy with the end result. Thank you so much. <3 The squee makes all the freaking out worth it.

slartibartfast February 6 2010, 10:16:18 UTC

Awww I ♥ this so much! Sam as a girl is brilliant, the knife in her boot and how she interacts with Jess. I absolutely love the scene in the lingerie store!

And it's so sad, the end scene - such a cute fic and then my heart got all torn out, just the way fics should be. ♥

little_missmimi February 12 2010, 05:59:14 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm a fan of that part myself. :)

Aw, I'm sorry about that, but I'm glad you liked it. ♥

familiardevil February 6 2010, 13:07:41 UTC

ANYTIME GIRL. ANYTIME.
I LOVE this fic. It's so Sam and so Jess and it makes my heart happy (and sad at the end ): ). The lingerie store scene is still really hot and cute. A++++++++++++++++++

Thank you so much for joining in on the exchange bb! ♥ Hope to see you next time <3

little_missmimi February 12 2010, 07:35:52 UTC

Thank you for both the encouragement and the feedback. "Happy (and sad at the end)" seems to be what I'm writing these days.

Probably, yeah! You'll sucker me in to it again. <3

scintilla10 February 7 2010, 03:35:25 UTC

Oh this was lovely! The two of them are so sweet and hot together, and the ending was heart-breaking all over again.

little_missmimi February 12 2010, 21:40:43 UTC

Thank you so much!