I am late for work as usual but I wanted to read this first.. If i wait until I have time then I will never read it.. And I know you're not around much atm - but you might see my comment..
I like when I read this that you seem to get right inside my head and make me experience things as Dean sees them. I particularly liked this:
**The pool of blood was diminishing, abstractly reversing the process of bleeding. His eye’s widened as the pool was gone and the blood smeared on the side of its head re-entered the entry wound, leaving the gaping red slit clean of blood.**
And then you leave me wanting more with this:
**...realising now was the time, the pieces were in place, ingredients were waiting and time was nigh.
The oven grinned at her as she closed the door, orange and grim.**
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I am late for work as usual but I wanted to read this first.. If i wait until I have time then I will never read it.. And I know you're not around much atm - but you might see my comment..
I like when I read this that you seem to get right inside my head and make me experience things as Dean sees them. I particularly liked this:
**The pool of blood was diminishing, abstractly reversing the process of bleeding. His eye’s widened as the pool was gone and the blood smeared on the side of its head re-entered the entry wound, leaving the gaping red slit clean of blood.**
And then you leave me wanting more with this:
**...realising now was the time, the pieces were in place, ingredients were waiting and time was nigh.
The oven grinned at her as she closed the door, orange and grim.**
And I have another chapter *happy dance*
Hugs
Julie
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