Fic: Jubilation Day

[crowroad3]

Genre: gen
Characters: Dean, Sam, Amara
Rating: G
Words: 500
Challenge: Big Pretzel birthday:  I went to…’s birthday party, and I took…
Summary: I want to Amara’s birthday party, and I took no prisoners. (or: the darkness and desserts, sort of.)

Comments

[dizzojay]

Lovely look at Amara and the logistical problems of her birthday, or her 'origin'.

I love Sam and Dean's thought processes, Dean's picnic dream and the flashback to Crowley.
Beautifully done :)

[crowroad3]

So glad you liked! Thank you for the awesome challenge(s)!

[jj1564]

I love your writing, it's so poetic and evocative! This is beautiful, I loved Sam and Dean mulling over Amara's origin, and Dean's dream of the picnic. I had to look up goetic, what a great image! And I loved this, I think we all agree with Amara...

"Dean of the deft hands; that’s the gift.

She’s never seen more beauty."

[crowroad3]

I'm so glad you like this; thanks very much for your lovely comment! (Those goetic demons are scary, huh?)

[laughablelament]

Mmm this is goooood. Rich, and I love Sam's idea to bring an offering (Dean?) and what happens next??

Also:

she says his name like it's just before dawn, like he’s the dawn and she don’t mind, like he’s the sun and not damned; like he is.

Whoa. Is this the bliss? (Incoherent. Mind blown.)

[crowroad3]

"What happens next?": plot? Which I don't got. Hee.

Dean just wants to be worthy of shining, I guess? That's your area of expertise.
( ;

[kattrip033]

Very poetic

[crowroad3]

Thank you ( :

[kattrip033]

You're welcome ^_^