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candygramme December 30 2019, 19:17:19 UTC
Poor Sammy, he's so used to keeping secrets that he's missed out on a lot of good times. Just imagine if he'd told Dean instead of swanning off to Stanford! I'm glad he finally go it out there in the open, because one thing's for sure. Dean would never have blurted out his feelings like this.

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theymp December 31 2019, 18:56:01 UTC
If only, but you're right, it had to be Sam to open up first. Also, I think sometimes, some things just take their own good time before they're ready... in this case it then just need a little helping nudge! Thanks for reading!

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dizzojay December 30 2019, 19:46:36 UTC
Heehee, Dean tied up in a red bow? Sam and I apparently have a lot in common XD

Great job, thank you :)

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theymp December 31 2019, 18:57:11 UTC
I think everyone's onboard that train ;-)

Thank you!

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dizzojay December 31 2019, 19:33:31 UTC
Choo-choo!! XD

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jdl71 December 30 2019, 20:57:12 UTC
This was fantastic. I loved it. I could picture all of this happening.

I wonder what it would be like to cover each of those kisses from the sun with kisses of my own? Who hasn't wondered that?

There were so many great lines in this story. you... stay strange was one of them that had me laughing. "Your powers of deduction are still top-notch despite your injury, I see," said Dean dryly. Totally Dean.

Thank you for writing this.

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theymp December 31 2019, 19:02:10 UTC
Who indeed!? It was good fun to write... I like to think that Dean's bafflement by the way Sam's mind works sometimes is part of what he likes about him.

Thank you so much!

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jj1564 December 30 2019, 23:59:38 UTC
Aw, this is so sweet, funny and full of Christmas spirit, I loved it! The banter between the boys was perfectly them, and then when Sam started blurting out the truth it took a different turn but was still so in character. I loved this beautiful line...

He looked visibly surprised but pleased and a cautious smile took birth on his lips. It was, Sam considered, a small, beautiful thing, too delicate for this world and if not looked after carefully, it could all too easily die.

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theymp December 31 2019, 19:05:00 UTC
Ooh, I'm glad you liked that line, writing it made me (and Sam!) feel quite soppy!

Thank you

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fanspired December 31 2019, 02:06:23 UTC
Well done! You tied up the prompts very neatly. :D

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theymp December 31 2019, 19:07:02 UTC
I saw what you did there! ;-) They did all come together very nicely

Thanks!

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