Comments | splash_the_cat: Ficlet: "London Bridge is Falling"

splash_the_cat

Ficlet: "London Bridge is Falling"

May 18, 2005 23:04

Written for the Gateship Wednesday Shorts Episode Challenge: 2010. 300 Words. Gen. Angst. *smooches* to dsudis for the Write Club beta.

"London Bridge is Falling"

fic_stargate_tealc, fic_2005, fic_stargate_jack, fic_stargate, fic_stargate_gen

Comments 14

katcorvi May 19 2005, 03:30:54 UTC

I can feel Jack's anger at Teal'c and his team like vibrations of cymbals and bass guitar. It roils over me. I like that he pulls no punches. Great ficlet.

splash_the_cat June 8 2005, 18:07:56 UTC

Thanks, Kat!

fallenbelle May 19 2005, 03:57:01 UTC

Oh, this was nice. I could just feel Jack's hurt and anger at their betrayal resonating like the aforementioned instrument.

splash_the_cat June 8 2005, 18:08:09 UTC

Thanks so much!

lavidaessueno May 19 2005, 04:20:40 UTC

it hurts. I like that.

splash_the_cat June 8 2005, 18:08:25 UTC

Thank you! Pain is good. :)

cofax7 May 19 2005, 14:49:05 UTC

Oh, that's really good, and quite believable. Nice job.

splash_the_cat June 8 2005, 18:08:43 UTC

Thanks so much, Cofax.

sheaclaire May 19 2005, 17:09:48 UTC

WOW. You have Jack's voice down perfect here. PERFECT. Excellent work.

splash_the_cat June 8 2005, 18:08:50 UTC

Thank you!