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Akame: throw away your cares and fears, PG

Oct 20, 2007 22:23

Title: throw away your cares and fears
Pairing: Akame
Rating: PG
Warnings: None, really.
For: trangai. Ilu darling. ♥ This fic is complete at last, yay! I'm sorry it is so late and I hope you enjoy it ( Read more... )

rating: pg, #slash, fandom: johnny's entertainment, wc: 1000-5000, pairing: jin/kame, group: kat-tun

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twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 21:52:45 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH, you were the first commenter and you have no idea how much that means to me. I am always insecure when I post my fics, and the first few comments make me feel much better. I am really really glad you liked it. ♥♥♥

pixisity October 20 2007, 21:49:44 UTC

Finally a good fanfic that takes my breath away and doesn't leave me going huh? at the end. <333333333

I loved it all. (and reccing!) Thanks so much.

twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 21:53:59 UTC

I am glad it doesn't leave you going 'huh?' at the end, because it took me ages to figure out the ending properly and it all sounded really confusing in my own head, so I'm happy it came out all right.

Thanks for reading and reccing it! ♥

pixisity October 20 2007, 22:01:49 UTC

The ending was wonderful actually. I wish I could get good endings on my fics like that. I've been dying for the past few days to read decent stuff and finally....*feeds you cookies and chocolate of the virtual, non-fattening kind* I was getting desperate. *chuckles*

<3

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twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 22:42:45 UTC

ILU TRANG. ♥♥♥

Oh god I am so so so glad you liked this. I didn't really mean to make anyone feel like crying (except I felt like crying at certain parts of this fic too, but that may have to do with the fact I was listening to depressing music whilst I wrote this). But oh god kajsd;jdkj I love you so hard too, you are such a fabulous person. ♥ Thank you for this wonderful and long review. ♥7hearts;♥

twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 22:44:16 UTC

GOD ME AND MY RIDICULOUS TYPING SKEELZ. There was meant to be three hearts at the end of that comment. ♥

sun_ming October 20 2007, 22:31:40 UTC

Kame learns now that the world doesn’t ever pause for anyone, but this revelation doesn’t comfort him. The fear grows and folds itself into his sleep, sprouting nightmares of red flames, burning and consuming everything in their path (amusement parks and apartment blocks), and all the while he looks on, helpless, as the world keeps on spinning. One day the stage lights will disappear entirely and there will be not a single screaming fan left.I really, really loved that little bit, even though it made me kind of go DDDD: (especially the last part), but there was something about it that just appealed to me. And there were several other lines that I loved (basically, I just loved the entire fic XD), but if I quoted everything I liked, this comment will be just as long as your fic XD ( ... )

twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 22:49:25 UTC

Oh, I am glad you liked that bit! I often include dream scenes in my fics, because personally, I think dreams reveal a lot abpit everything. There are many things about myself and the things happening around me that I've discovered through dreams.

And hee, 9 is my favourite number. :DV I adore open endings too, because it's like life, isn't it? Most things don't have a certain ending-- they always carry on and change in some way.

Of course I don't mind if you mem this! I feel very honoured. :D ♥

sun_ming October 20 2007, 23:06:50 UTC

Ah well I guess people do say that dreams are created from figments of your imagination that reflect on your own worries, fears, insecurities, etc... which I happen to think are very true (but then again, I don't remember any of my dreams so I wonder if that's a bad sign XD).

And I love when authors leave the endings to their stories open-ended because that way, there'll always be that little bit of uncertainty there... and you'll never know for sure what will happen to the characters, and it makes you think and draw your own conclusions depending on your own imagination. And like you said, that's just life because there never is any real conclusion and if you knew exactly how everything will turn out... well, that's just no fun XD.

gothicauthor October 20 2007, 22:44:59 UTC

WTF, DB!"care" started playing just as I got to part five, and it was sad. T.T

But then I read on, and it was yay again. XD

Gothic Author

twirlingleaves October 20 2007, 22:50:57 UTC

Ahahahaha that happens to me a lot too. I swear my music player is ~intelligent~, it always knows when to put on the depressing songs. xD

Thank you for the comment! :D