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Alias: Failure to Deal With Ice

Feb 05, 2009 23:13

Title: Failure to Deal With Ice
Fandom: Alias
Feedback: ... Is loverly.
Word Count: 1548
Rating: PG
Characters: Sark, one random Russian OC, and an old lady
Summary: Russian winters hate special ops. Sark is learning this the hard way.
Disclaimer: I own about as much as I did the last time I did one of these things. Which is nothing.
Author's Note: ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

allfireburns February 6 2009, 07:55:12 UTC

....You know, I believe you've put your word count in place of your characters in your header, sweetie. *Points up* I thought it was weird that you just posted two stories with the exact same word count, and then... no. Not so much. *Grin*

Also, do you REALIZE your narration does the most ridiculous things when you're writing a Sark story? Not bad things, because it sounds like Sark, but it just makes me laugh, because... well. You know how Sark speaks.

All of this might actually have been prevented if the house he had chosen to duck into wasn't owned by a old babushka whose sole reaction to an unexpected blond twentysomething ducking into her house to escape from a terrorist who wanted him dead wasn't so much to scream in terror as it was to hold him hostage.
First... *Ded of win* Oh, Sark. Sark, Sark, Sark. Only you. Second, I think you meant "an old babushka". ...I'm sorry for the compulsive corrections, I CAN'T HELP MYSELF.

The Russian roof-clearing details in Saint Petersburg are clearly sub-par and should be reprimanded for ( ... )

kawaiispinel February 6 2009, 19:13:42 UTC

...I was really tired last night. And distracted, because LJ wasn't cooperating with my copy-paste. I KNEW SOMETHING WAS GOING TO GO HILARIOUSLY WRONG SOMEWHERE. XD

My narration does the most ridiculous things when I'm writing Alias, in general, I think. *giggles* My Sydneyvoice is the Snark Channel. Oh, kids. You make it far too easy to be snarky.

XD ONLY SARK. And... Dammit. I do mean that. And I don't mind! I am occasionally a dunce and miss things when I'm doing the edits, especially tiny things.

ALSO THAT LINE IS TECHNICALLY MAGI'S. THAT WAS THE LINE THAT INSPIRED THIS STORY. XD Actually, se's rambling about how Sark probably has this happen to him all the time inspired this story, but when se said that, I knew I had to write it. THIS WAS MUCH BETTER INSPIRATION I'VE GOTTEN FROM MAGI THAN THE MASTER STORY.

Hee. I love WRITING him, because he's such a little BITCH. *glees!*