Somehow I'm neither here nor there...

Sep 19, 2006 13:54



Title: It's Gonna Be Good
Author: Chris (Me!)
Feedback: And you'll get my undying devotion and respect... And you'll make me happy! Everyone has the right to be happy, riiight? *grin*
Characters:/Pairings Gabriel-centric (with mention of Diana, Dan, and Natalie)
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG-ish
Summary: Gabriel has his own reasoning for "haunting" his ( Read more... )

fandom:feeling electric

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allfireburns September 19 2006, 19:21:34 UTC
Thaaaat was creepy. Slightly creepier than the version of Gabriel I usually use, but it's definitely believable, and I can definitely see that being Gabriel's thought process. Very nice.

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kawaiispinel September 19 2006, 20:53:14 UTC
Yes! I was going for the creepy factor. *dances* Thank you so much! ^_^

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cameraneverlies September 19 2006, 19:45:30 UTC
That was...chilling. Gabriel's just one of those characters that, when you get right down to is, is so damn creepy and you've captured it perfectly here. Wonderful, wonderful job.

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kawaiispinel September 19 2006, 20:54:45 UTC
Indeeden. I love creepy!Gabe. ^__^ I'm just glad I pulled it off. I was a mite nervous about being... I dunno... Off somehow. Thanks!

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pickle_breath September 19 2006, 20:39:25 UTC
best use of imagery that can't be the right way to spell it.....) in that first paragraph, It grabbed my attention quickly and kept me on edge. Very very well done.

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kawaiispinel September 19 2006, 20:55:24 UTC
Thank you ever so much! ^__^

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