the beautiful side of somewhere [2/?]

[spindriftt]

title: the beautiful side of somewhere
author: spindriftt
rating: pg-13 (domestic violence, language)
pairings: jaemin; jongkey; sunye/changmin frienship; various others
disclaimer: I am not LSM or JYP.  I don't own any of the artists in this story.

jaejoong's in love with a beautiful boy and a beautiful girl he doesn't know.  But they give him hope,

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[dongbangboys]

spot?

[dongbangboys]

oh my goodness..

beautiful.. absolutely beautiful
you can actually feel jae's pain and see his suffering
wow...

so hes in love with both of them.
But he only told changmin his real name. i have to go reread it!

[spindriftt]

thank you so much, darling :DDDD
yes, he's in love with them both right now, or, rather, his fixated with both of them in a way, but he'll be in love with Min totally, once he meets him.

[violetgurl33]

this kind of story is so not easy to write.

well it is but the thing is all that damm research.

*groans*

i have my own story for which the rough outline is ready. what i cant bring myslef to do is research rapists and montreal/paris??>.< still deciding. i'll figure it out=D

i love well written AU fanfiction. whats good abt it is you can change the names later work on the storyline a little more and it can be an origific as well. my advice would be to put a copyright on all of them or at least state that. trust me, you do NOT want plagiarism.

i love jaejoong and min. fascinating main characters. interesting backdrop. and jae's fixation with this couple's beauty is kinda funny XD

[spindriftt]

Oh gosh, tell me about it. I'm just hoping I'm really not screwing up.

Exactly. I started developing this fic during our writing period in American Lit., and my teacher asked us to read what we had written out loud. I just changed the names up, and voila! :D

Ah~ I think putting up a copyright is a good idea. Especially with what happened with sum3r 's B.O.Y.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥. I think Jae's so tainted right now that if he sees anything "beautiful" like Min and Sunye, he latches on to it.

[spindriftt]

Oh, best of luck with your fic too! I'll be looking out for it <33

[kurogoma]

have been waiting for your update, yeeah!!! :D

so jaejoong already knew of changmin even before changmin noticed his existence? i like how he refer to min as the beautiful boy and how he was in love with him already. i did wonder how was it that changmin was captivated by the striking appearance of jaejoong playing the guitar, but did not notice jaejoong at the cafe? or maybe changmin was almost always oblivious. :D

the feel of this chapter is befitting of jaejoong, with a very streetsmart almost jaded tone to it.

[spindriftt]

Yay! ♥
Sorry it took a week. Damn finals.

Yep. Changmin and Sun ye have caught Jae's eyes since a long time ago. He's idolized what he sees and imagines Min to be, so he's fallen in love, more so, with his fantasy of just, a beautiful looking, perfect boy and girl, rather than the actual people.

I think Min is the kind of person who's so stuck in the constant, fast-paced rut of life that he doesn't give thought to anything unless he has to. Maybe he's noticed Jae in the corner before, but it didn't really matter to him until he was directly associated with him- which he was, when he recognized "November Rain." Also, he's sleepy in the mornings and preoccupied with his annoying best friend xDDD

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting again, dear. <3333

[emda]

I think Jaejoong is the only stalker I wouldn't mind to have. Like the chapter and yes u did progress... now we know Jaejoong and how other people call him and who the beautiful boy and girl. Plus you just introduce two new characters. So I see a progress.
Like it a LOT!!!
keep it up!!

[spindriftt]

Hee, me neither.
I guess I actually did~ Thanks for making me feel better about it <33

[figmagination]

Wow... 0.0 I'm so completely blown away by this chapter. Your writing is amazing. I have been waiting for this chapter and it was so worth it. It was fascinating to read how Sun Ye and MIn, two (almost) strangers, make Jae's day a little brighter. Does he wish to share in their "perfection" and happiness? Does he hope that they/Min can bring him out of the lonliness in his life? It was so lovely that Jae has already fallen for Min and revealed his real name to him. Although, Min must be extremely oblivious to not notice Jae in the cafe. Of course, he needs coffee, so maybe he's not perceptive without the caffeine. LOL. Anyway, bravo on the chapter. I absolutely loved it (in case you couldn't tell) and can't wait for more! Please update soon~!

[spindriftt]

Thank you so so so so much. You don't know what it means to me that some people are commenting and appreciating my writing and my story like this. ♥♥♥
He does; it's a fixation. Now that he's finally met Min, I think he's totally fallen for him. Before it was just a wistful admiration to be a part of what they were. Now he wants it more than anything.
Haha. Min's not too observant in the mornings? xDD

Now that finals are coming to an end, I will try to update soon. I already started.
Again, thanks so much for reading, sweetie.