Comments | spinberryblue: the science of a heart

mawaru_berry in spinberryblue

the science of a heart

Apr 26, 2010 21:55

Fandom: Super Junior, some f(x) and Girls’ Gen
Pairing(s): Heechul/Hankyung, Donghae/Jessica, (maybe sibling!)HanToria
Rating: R
Summary: Heechul spends his nineteenth summer in China. And when it's time to go home, his heart is squeezing itself up out through his throat, bleeding his emotions all around. It sucks.
Word count: 2978

A/N: I've been ( Read more... )

suju: donghae, suju: han geng, g: angst, p: donghae/jessica, fandom: super junior, fandom: f(x), f(x): krystal, sj family: geng's mom!, for: wickedlove13, snsd: jessica, 100 fics challenge, suju: heechul, p: heechul/han geng, f(x): victoria, fandom: girls' generation, r: r, suju: eunhyuk

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mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 01:57:02 UTC

wickedlove13 if you'd like the spot, baby &hearts

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Re: I LOVE YOU LOTS mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 02:56:13 UTC

LOL YOU. Yes, that's Geng!

HOW DO I MAKE WHAT WORK? :O ILY TOO!

I like being subtle XD I think I can only be that way in fics, tbh.

HEECHUL DOES NOT KNOW EVERYTHING. He likes to think he does, though.

This fic hurt me, but I like it as much as an author can like her work without being anything close to pompous >.<

THANK YOU FOR THE CORRECTION *GLOMPS*

LJ didn't cut you off at all, LOL! YAY!

I love when you quote, baby :D

Ilysfm, this is why I write you random HanChul, lol. Or other pairings you ask for, because I had to make a list, remember? lmao, us. I don't know what I've done to deserve YOU, okay? ;____;

CHULBITCH *CLINGS* <934629385601397t8er97109

sirhin April 27 2010, 02:27:45 UTC

GAH! This was beautiful even though it's a bit depressing at the end. I loved how you portrayed Heechul and the glimpse into his mind was perfect! I hope they'll meet again. -crosses fingers-

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 02:57:32 UTC

Thank you so much! It would be nice if they met again ;___; idk if I'd do a sequel though, haha. Then it might turn itself into a chaptered fic, that happens to me XD

sirhin April 27 2010, 03:43:23 UTC

... I don't see it as a bad thing. :D hehe...

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 03:57:30 UTC

lol well it's not really a bad thing, true~

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13fireflies April 27 2010, 03:31:52 UTC

OKAY YOU KNOW WHAT YOU NEED TO THROW HEECHUL BACK INTO CHINA.
NOW.

There's so much i want to quote but i'm actually supposed to be studying for my french unit test tomorrow and all this hanchul goodness is not helping me memorize my vocabulaire. Oh well, i'll look at it later.

But it's Hanchul!! And it's not too fluffy, but not tooangsty either. It's a nice combination of both. Lol, so tell me, did you write Hantoria with them being siblings in mind or actually a couple? AND KRYSTAL ASLJGLJGJDGSJDGSLALDAGSAGS SO CUUUUUTE~~ Even though she's like the same age as me, i want to squeeze her and pat her head. XDDDDD ( ... )

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 03:55:43 UTC

;__________; THE ANGST MADE ME THROW HIM INTO KOREA, I SWEAR.

I'm sorry, baby! Go study~ sending my best wishes for vocabulary memorization!

HanToria…I kind of wanted to show Vicky as having this big attachment to him, and him being pretty attached to her, too. Sort of like she has a crush on him, but he just loves her as if she were his little sister. I do have a scene I took out of this where Geng explains to Heech how Victoria and Donghae and Hyukjae and the Jung sisters came to live with him. KRYSTAL IS SO ADORABLE I LOVE HER. LITTLE JUNG!

I like HaeSica XD I was so subtle in this with side pairings, lol. There are actually quite a few other things/scenes I took out of this for some reason, and I'm not sure why I'm telling you this lol. Maybe because I trust you :D

SUBTLE KAI IS ONLY SUBTLE WITH FICS D:

LMAO I HAVE NOTICED THAT. You're usually like "I have a test to study for, but I'mma read this!" omg I'm so sorry I do that, I don't know how it happens!

Study well ♥

13fireflies April 27 2010, 04:24:51 UTC

TT_______________TT HE NEEDS TO GET THROWN BACK. IDK, LOAD HIM ON A CATAPULT AND FIRE HIM INTO GENG'S BED.

I think i'll be okay. I'm pretty used to cramming vocab into my head the night before. XD I think i work better under pressure.

I see, but that's still sweet though, I'm getting this mental image where Vicky is tugging on geng's sleeve but he's just kind of paying attention to heechul instead and kind of ignoring her on purpose to tease her but she's stubborn and keeps tugging because she wants his attention, and eventually he laughs and turns around and picks her up, twirls her around and kisses her forehead.
Woah. Strange.

Haesica, i knew Dongsica sounded funny, but i couldn't remember the exact name. Memory glitch. D: People take scenes out all the time! I do that too, except i usually cross it out on Word, and when i re-read, i decide if i still want to keep it or not. Yay~ you trust me! ^^ Me too, bb i trust you too.

THAT'S OKAY. I'M NEVER REALLY SUBTLE ANYWAYS. >___It's so weird!! Lol, maybe it's another one of our ( ... )

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 04:45:09 UTC

LMAO ILY BABY *LOADS HEECH ONTO A CATAPULT* :Db

Okay, as long as you think you'll be okay, I have faith in you ♥ haha, I kinda think I work better under pressure, too.

OMG THAT IMAGE IS PERFECT AND I MAY POSSIBLY BORROW THIS IF I DO MY VICTORIA SPIN-OFF. Unless you want to write a HanToria fic like this, in which case I shall back off~ BUT THAT IS SO CUTE YOU HAVE SET OF A SERIES OF SPASMS FOR ME NOW, SQUEEEEE

Haha, Dongsica does sound kinda funny. Memory glitches are fine, they happen! I have some of them written in my notebook (surrounded by chem notes, haha) and the other stuff I just remember vaguely. There was some HyukHae, actually. But you seem to have a good system :) WE TRUST EACH OTHERRR ♥♥♥

KAISICA = NOT SUBTLE yes i just namesquished usMaybe it is! That wouldn't be too surprising, because we definitely have linked brains or mutual psychic powers that keep us unconsciously tuned in to each other's thoughts. Aw, yay, well I'll always be happy to be your stress-reliever. You are definitely mine, because I get all smiley ( ... )

thundersquall April 27 2010, 06:30:56 UTC

Bb, you always always write so gorgeously. *___* You really ought to be proud of this, because it's stunning. Beautiful and realistic, and I love the cameos you put in from Victoria and the Jung sisters and HyukHae. :D The HanChul was so perfect, the development was just slow and nicely-paced and not rushed, and my heart BROKE for Heechul at the end. ;___; STOP WRITING ANGST, YOU, IT RUINS MY HEART. &HEARTS;

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 19:06:29 UTC

The cameos were fighting to be more main, haha. Especially Victoria, because I'm so biased towards her in f(x) XD but I'm so happy you like my cameos! My brain likes to put out angst, I cannot lie…even though it hurts ;____; I CAN'T STOP WRITING ANGST, IT MAKES ME FEEL WEIRD. I will write you fluff! ♥

shihan_ai April 27 2010, 13:46:13 UTC

*chanting* why am i reading hanchul why am i reading hanchul

THIS PAIRING KILLS ME BUT IM NOT EVEN GOING TO LIE BB, THIS IS STUNNING. GORGEOUS AND QUIET AND FRAGILE IN THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WAY. it's prob a good idea that it's not like hanjae or kyuhan cuz i would prob be sobbing my heart out now...

haesica and kinda hantoria- i approve! <3

He doesn't even mind when Krystal wants to tag along, or when Victoria's nearly attached to Han Geng at the hip. Because no matter what, Han Geng is looking at Heechul. Even when Han Geng has Krystal propped up on his side, carrying her around when her feet get tired, Heechul doesn't seem to mind and he hates that he doesn't, in a way, it's so unlike him.
oh heechul....why are you like this. i really like this part, cuz it shows how much they care without really saying it

kyu appearance made me ridiculously happy for some strange reason

♥

mawaru_berry April 27 2010, 19:10:26 UTC

I saw your comment in my email and I was like "WHAT WHAT WHO IS THIS OMG THIS IS ANNIE BUT WHAT WHAT HUH?" and then I calmed down.

kajfhg I've really wanted to do some KyuHan or SiHan angst, but I don't want you to cryyyyyy D: and now I'm in a pickle~

THE HANTORIA WAS SECONDS CLOSE TO BECOMING REALLLL HANTORIA IN THIS XD biasbiasbiased

Of course the Kyu appearance made you happy, he was in a fic that happened to have Geng in it also, which is…sort of almost KyuHan? This is my reasoning, lol.

♥

shihan_ai April 28 2010, 01:57:41 UTC

OMG I DONT CARE IF I CRY MY EYES OUT I HAVE AN INSATIABLE NEED FOR YOUR KYUHAN/SHIHAN ETC OMG I WAS LOOKING THROUGH ALL THE FICS IVE STARTED AND THEY ARE LIKE ALLLL GENG RELATED HOLY SHIT. WHY ARE WE SUCH GENGWHORES???

YES I LIKE WHAT YOU DID WITH THE HANTORIA CUZ ITS NOT EXPLICITLY SAID (WHICH WOULD RUIN IT A BIT) BUT THERES STILL THE POSSIBILITY THAT THEY'LL END UP TOGETHER~ AND THE INTERESTING THING IS CUZ CHUL LIKES HER SO MUCH, HE CANT EVEN HATE HER EVEN IF SHE DOES HAVE HIS PRECIOUS GENG

kyuuuuuuuuuu~ yes any fic that has both kyu and geng in it makes me automatically want them to get together. like no lie i totally bribed someone into adding a kyuhan scene in a shihan/qMI fic hahaha WIN!

♥

mawaru_berry April 28 2010, 02:29:58 UTC

YOU AND YOUR INSATIABLE NEEDS XD LOL ALMOST ALL MY FICS ARE GENG-RELATED. WE REALLY ARE GENG WHORESSSSSSS.

IT TOOK ALL MY WILLPOWER TO NOT WRITE THEM ACTUALLY TOGETHER IN THIS, LOL. HANCHULTORIA. FOR SOME REASON I SEE CHUL + VICKY AS FRIENDS. I FEEL LIKE HEECH LOVES F(X) LOL. Espcially Sulli-he loves his lil dongsaeng~

lol you, of course any fic with the both of them in it = you wanting KyuHan. YOU AND YOUR BRIBING XD

:D

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