All the Ways We Drowned (2/3)

[spin_deep]

Title: All the Ways We Drowned (2/3)
Author: spin_deep
Character/Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: NC-17/R
Word Count: This part, about 5k. Total, about 14k
Summary: If you were receiving these notes, I would say: I love you. I'm sorry. I didn't do what they say I did. I love you.
Sirius looks back, and then forward.
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters

Comments

[fusayfeesah]

I absolutely love the Marauders' dynamic in this piece. The dialogue is spot-on. I especially loved "You'd better come, Lily's pregnant and crazy."

favorites: 93, 104, 112, 127, 131. 135 is too real. You definitely captured Remus's cruelty.

[spin_deep]

Thank you, again, so very very much! I'm glad you liked how I wrote the marauders - I'm always a little hesitant to write them, because they're such an interesting group, and it's so easy to mess them up, so it's very good to hear that you liked them. xx