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dancingpony December 6 2024, 11:11:20 UTC

I always like your Mrs S. Nice job.

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 11:45:04 UTC

Thanks!

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dancingpony December 6 2024, 11:12:42 UTC
What can I say … bland words …

“You look barely awake.” Illya set two steaming cups onto their adjoining desks, clearly fighting a smile.

“Thanks.” Napoleon grabbed one and inhaled. Commissary coffee was stale and bitter, but he could use the caffeine … and a few hours of sleep.

“Rough night?” One blond brow rose. “Our illustrious CEA seems to be missing his usual sass and sangfroid today.”

“I’m not the one prone to sass,” Napoleon countered, “and I had a fantastic night … even though it wasn’t long enough.” He met his partner’s eyes and grinned at the faint flush staining the Russian’s cheeks. “As you should know.”

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 11:45:53 UTC

They weren't the most exciting, but I liked what you did with them. :D

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dancingpony December 6 2024, 12:53:56 UTC
Thanks. They seemed to need a little bit of … spice.

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nakeisha December 6 2024, 12:23:34 UTC
Ooooooh. Nice; very nice indeed. Well done, DP; I thought you used the words really well; seamlessly in fact.

I must say I do love the last line *Beams* That's brightened my day.

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olden_fan December 6 2024, 11:30:54 UTC
Here’s my attempt…

“Are you awake?”
“Mmmph.”
“Can you please use words?”
Sigh. “Yes, Napoleon.”
“That was a long interrogation session.”
Snort. “I’d say.”
“Did you have to sass Angelique like that? It never pays.”
“I disagree. I picked up some information …”
“Like?”
“Just a second. Is there water?”
“Here. Let me help you.”
Groan.
“Are you okay?”
“Fantastic.”
“Sarcasm does not become you.”
“Sorry.” Cough. “Your illustrious girlfriend did make a revelation or two.”
“Do tell?”
“She has apparently been dating Ben Willis…”
“From Research?”
Pause.
“…who is heading Project Pandora?”
“The same.”
Groan. “Fantastic.”
“Sarcasm does not become you, either.”

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 11:46:39 UTC

Well done. For simple words, they were hard to coax anything out of them.

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olden_fan December 6 2024, 11:48:59 UTC
…but Mrs. Slocombe always comes through!

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 13:23:17 UTC

Thanks!

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shirebound December 6 2024, 11:44:35 UTC
That last line is a gem. I feel the same way. :)

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 11:46:54 UTC

Same here. More and more these days, in fact...

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thespian15 December 6 2024, 11:58:03 UTC
He is definitely a work in progress. lol..........

Hugs, Jon

I came through this week...

I'm AWAKE. I'm AWAKE.
It was still dark outside, and my husband was standing next to me.
"It wasn't me that wanted to beat the weekend Christmas shoppers."
I was USE to the SASS, but it wasn't going to help this conversation if I made it any LONGer.
David tried to act like he hated going out shopping, but he was the most ILLUSTRIOUS bargain hunter of all time. It was FANTASTIC to see him in action.

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spikesgirl58 December 6 2024, 13:23:51 UTC

But you got something written and that's what counts! Good job.

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thespian15 December 9 2024, 01:37:24 UTC
I called in sick Thursday night and that allowed me some time to think. :)

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spikesgirl58 December 9 2024, 02:03:11 UTC
Are you okay?

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