The Six Word Challenge

Sep 13, 2024 03:03

It only seemed appropriate to celebrate the 13th with ( Read more... )

grimm, six words

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dancingpony September 13 2024, 10:16:08 UTC
This was a good use of the words!

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spikesgirl58 September 13 2024, 11:03:01 UTC

Thanks! It seems right for today!

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dancingpony September 13 2024, 10:16:49 UTC


“This stream of inane chatter is giving me a headache,” Illya hissed, sotto voce, from behind his menu.

“At least we’re sitting down.” Napoleon sighed wearily; after a morning escorting elderly ladies on a shopping trip, he preferred facing Thrush rifles.

“I don’t suppose they might compromise and agree to visit a museum instead of Macy’s after lunch.”

“What in Heaven’s name are you young men whispering about?” one of the matrons scolded from across the table.

Napoleon winced. “I was just, ah, suggesting my partner save room for dessert. The cheesecake here was nominated for New York City’s finest.”

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olden_fan September 13 2024, 10:46:16 UTC
Cleverly handled!

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dancingpony September 13 2024, 13:02:13 UTC
Thanks.

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 10:50:05 UTC
*Chuckles* Well played, DP.

A good use of words and a fun little scene - poor Napoleon & Illya.

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olden_fan September 13 2024, 10:47:01 UTC
Why was this so tricky?

“This must be heaven. The trees, the little stream…”
“The manifestation of Beethoven’s 6th, isn’t it?” Collapsing back into the grass, the Russian sighed. “But I’d rather not find my way to your heaven quite yet.”
“I’m sure there is room there for even your reprobate Communist soul,” Solo jibed gently.
“Your heaven may compromise to accept me, but I may not wish to go there yet.”
“Feels so good to rest…”
“But I am bleeding...more steadily. I nominate you to go to the chemist’s shop in that village and fetch supplies...”
Sigh… “Okay, I’ll go, Illya.”
Silence
“Illya?!”

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 10:51:32 UTC
You've used the words well, OF. A good conversation.

Oh, gosh. I do hope Illya has only fallen asleep!

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olden_fan September 13 2024, 11:09:26 UTC
I’m sure he’s fine… just a bit of healthy literary ambiguity!

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 11:13:50 UTC
Oh, good *g*

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 10:49:05 UTC
A good use of words, Spike. And an interesting little story.

Well done.

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spikesgirl58 September 13 2024, 11:05:20 UTC

Thanks! I used to love it on the show when they would come across something other than the regular monsters.

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 10:52:44 UTC
Here's mine - it follows on immediately from the one I wrote last week *wry grin*

"For heaven's sake, Neil, won't you ever compromise?" Peele shouted.

Neil said nothing.

"We'll see what 'C' has to say!"

"You go. I'm going to the shop. I need cigarettes." Neil strode out of the room.

Rain streamed down the window, so he decided to go to the hutch and cadge from Willie.

"Hey, boss. What did Peele have to say?"

Neil took a cigarette from the packet on Willie's desk. "He's gone to talk to 'C'."

Willie grinned. "I doubt he's going to nominate you for employee of the month."

Neil shrugged and lit both his and Willie's cigarettes.

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spikesgirl58 September 13 2024, 11:06:15 UTC

Heh, life in the office. No wonder they are happier in the field. Good job, as always!

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nakeisha September 13 2024, 11:13:23 UTC
Indeed. He & Peele were never exactly 'the best of friends'. Thank you, very much.

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dancingpony September 13 2024, 13:01:49 UTC
Good scene and good use of the words. But … could you translate “go to the hutch and cadge” please? Just so I understand fully?

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