The Six Word Challenge

Aug 02, 2024 03:03

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mfu, six words

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dancingpony August 2 2024, 10:06:30 UTC
Oh, dear. I can almost picture three Angeliques. Good job.

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spikesgirl58 August 2 2024, 11:00:18 UTC

Thanks! :DD

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dancingpony August 2 2024, 10:06:54 UTC
And mine:

Napoleon shot his cuffs as he examined the glittering facade. “Tre Sorelle … Three Sisters. That sounds promising.”

“It’s what you are supposed to think,” Illya huffed as he stationed himself in the shadows. “Three lovely Italian girls … who will turn out to be in their nineties … if they exist.

“You’re such a cynic.”

“It will be a typical New York City restaurant - exclusive clientele, exorbitant prices, and food that is barely eatable.”

The senior agent paused, feigning an afterthought. “You’re probably right about the prices. You’d better loan me twenty dollars.”

“I can’t,” Illya said, deadpan. “I forgot my wallet.”

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olden_fan August 2 2024, 10:31:22 UTC
Perfectly done! Gave me a morning chuckle,

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dancingpony August 2 2024, 12:57:17 UTC
Thanks!

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spikesgirl58 August 2 2024, 11:01:11 UTC

Hahaha, so Napoleon! Good job!

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olden_fan August 2 2024, 10:32:01 UTC
Here is mine:

“Not far to the way station, we can get assistance there.” Illya’s tone was chilly - almost as frigid as the weather.
“I apologized for getting us lost…”
“Napoleon! You forgot to secure lodging, and the hotels around here are exclusive - and full.”
“I’ve never had a problem here before.”
“The way station is run by the Sisters of Holy Hospitality, my guidebook said.”
“They are renowned for their food - which is so much better than eatable!” Solo said, as if that were an afterthought.
“As I am terribly hungry, that might alleviate the tension.”
Solo smiled, knowing his partner’s priorities.

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spikesgirl58 August 2 2024, 11:02:05 UTC

Of course, Illya has priorities that must be met. :DD Good job.

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olden_fan August 2 2024, 12:17:08 UTC
Thank you!

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nakeisha August 2 2024, 11:06:33 UTC
A good use of the words. Well done.

Napoleon knows Illya's priorities so well.

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olden_fan August 2 2024, 10:33:35 UTC
spikesgirl58 I really enjoyed yours! What a setup for a story - or two!

Well played.

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spikesgirl58 August 2 2024, 11:01:24 UTC

Thank you! :DD And who knows?

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nakeisha August 2 2024, 11:03:11 UTC
Very well done, Spike. A nice little story and great fun. It can picture it clearly.

I loved the last line in particular.

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spikesgirl58 August 2 2024, 16:09:18 UTC

Thanks so very much. :DD

Always.

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