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olden_fan August 18 2023, 14:04:36 UTC
Very well done! I could visualize the entire story cinematically. Loved it!

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spikesgirl58 August 18 2023, 14:51:39 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.

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reapermum August 18 2023, 14:13:54 UTC
That was good. And you got my level of tolerance for violence right.

I must admit I'd forgotten you were going to be doing these, thank you.

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spikesgirl58 August 18 2023, 14:52:39 UTC

It has been a while, but I wanted to make sure I had the bulk of the stories behind me before I started posting.

I'm glad you liked it. I was a little worried.

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reapermum August 18 2023, 18:43:30 UTC
Actually MfU writers don't seem to pass my boundaries, but Halloween can get close so I thought I'd mention it, just in case.

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bonniejean1953 August 18 2023, 14:58:11 UTC
A good read with my coffee! Bravo, my dear.

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spikesgirl58 August 18 2023, 18:40:43 UTC
Thank you so much! : DD

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ragnarok_08 August 18 2023, 19:23:10 UTC
This was so well done!!

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spikesgirl58 August 18 2023, 22:24:29 UTC

Thanks for reading.

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akane42me August 18 2023, 21:36:22 UTC
Good job! Justice has been served:D

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spikesgirl58 August 18 2023, 22:24:47 UTC

I would like to think so. thanks for reading!

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