A story for Open Channel D

[spikesgirl58]

She posted a lovely manip the other day and it inspired this:

Title: The RavineRating: G -PG

Comments

[avery11]

Well done. I liked the setting very much, and Illya's first-person delivery was great. And then there's Posey (LOL). I had to chuckle--shades of Wi-il-son!! Now there's another match made in heaven.

[spikesgirl58]

Thanks! I hope that she enjoys it.

Posey is *um* actually based upon a potholder that we have up at the bunkhouse and who I talk to when everyone else is on a hike and I'm alone. It's very quiet there...

[bonniejean1953]

What a great read. The story told in Illya's voice.. just lovely. You nailed it kiddo. Thanks for posting it!

[spikesgirl58]

Thank you for reading! Seriously, whenever someone tells me that I got the voice right, it curls my toes!

Happy now!

[open_channel_d]

Thank you so much again :)
I can't stop admiring your stories. That was awesome!
And btw I should confess it's not only Illya who is ready to get lost in Napoleon's eyes :)

[spikesgirl58]

You are so very kind - thank you!

Well, I suspect you would have a lot of company in getting lost in that particular spot!