Comments | spikesgirl58: A new Mouth of Babes

spikesgirl58

A new Mouth of Babes

Jun 01, 2018 06:24

Title: The Harsh Light of Reality
Genre: mild slashiness
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2027
Warnings: language, prejudice

alynwa gave me this prompt, wondering how their little family would deal with the fact that Napoleon and Illya were a bit more than just working partners. My thanks to her and to sparky955 for her beta ( Read more... )

slash sort of, mouth of babes

Comments 16

duckys_lady June 1 2018, 15:41:06 UTC

Well done! I loved the progression of the great day . . . all the way to the great life.

spikesgirl58 June 1 2018, 15:43:03 UTC

Thanks! I did get a nasty comment from ff.net from my little slash basher. I feel badly for her tiny world and mind.

jkkitty June 1 2018, 16:15:26 UTC

Family and love, you got it in one. As for that negative comment on FF, she should reread your story and maybe get the point that she is like Kevin's father.

spikesgirl58 June 1 2018, 20:24:47 UTC

Sadly these people seem to think they need to reeducate everyone else rather than themselves...

Thanks for reading and for the support.

gevr June 1 2018, 18:40:06 UTC

If more people would live by these four words "Love, trust, honor, commitment" the wold would a much, much better place.
And your ff-stalker should better look into her own bossom instead of spying around to see if she can condemn something - her own heart surely is very black indeed.

spikesgirl58 June 1 2018, 20:28:24 UTC

Sadly, I fear that is the case. Her world must be very small and dark.

Thank you so much and I completely agree, if only people would honor those words more. *hugs*

gevr June 1 2018, 20:29:40 UTC

hugs you back :-)

spikesgirl58 June 1 2018, 20:56:16 UTC

:DDD

alynwa June 1 2018, 20:57:02 UTC

Wow! I let a plot bunny escape and didn't even notice! I'm so happy that you got an idea from something I said. I enjoyed this; that bit of reality is sad, but true, but it doesn't matter to our boys because it doesn't matter to their children and grandchildren. People can be so bloody judgmental and the more ignorant, the more judgmental they are, like Kevin's dad.

Great story and thanks for giving me a little credit!

spikesgirl58 June 1 2018, 21:14:54 UTC

A little credit - this was all you, baby!

Thank you for a great prompt. it brought my 'slash is evil' twit out of the woodwork again, but it was so worth it for this.

*hugs*

ragnarok_08 June 2 2018, 01:23:10 UTC

This was so so so good!

spikesgirl58 June 2 2018, 12:05:36 UTC

Thank you so much. :D