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Neville Longbottom : The Man Who

Feb 12, 2006 11:02

Hee! During a free period at school I decided to whip up a gen-fic, because I haven’t really tried one and I adore Neville to absolute pieces ♥ I hope you all enjoy this :D

Title: The Man Who
Length: 439 words
Fandom: Harry Potter
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers ( Read more... )

harry potter, neville longbottom, fanfiction

Comments 21

rei_c February 12 2006, 00:21:53 UTC

Ooo. This was amazing. So much was said here -- the words you used, the tone they evoked, was just magical.

The ending was perfect, but I think this is my favourite line:

So he sows three seeds for three people, three seeds that in the spring will flourish into towering flora of pristine white.

It changes the piece from a general meditiation on Neville into something planted (no pun intended) in canon and character-study. Absolutely perfect.

Thank you for this!

ishibishispider February 12 2006, 00:53:36 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ♥ Character-study is something I really, really enjoy doing, but I don't often write it, so thank you very much for that feedback. It means a lot to me :D

tumbledstars February 12 2006, 00:54:30 UTC

Lovely, just lovely!!! The words are just your little minions. I WANT YOUR SOUL!!! Or at least your writing skills.

ishibishispider February 12 2006, 00:56:08 UTC

YOU ♥! Your help with this was so immeasurable, you are an absolute angel! Ssdfkjshdf, what are you talking about! You write wonderfully yourself :O ♥

tumbledstars February 12 2006, 00:58:47 UTC

IIIAAAHZHZ. Zomgz liek... I love to beta for you :DDD ♥ I know I write well... but I'm still gell-us! LOL XD

ishibishispider February 12 2006, 01:01:46 UTC

♥ Don't be jeaaaaaaalous! You is gooood :D Yay! I love it when you beta for me! *snuggles*

author_by_night February 12 2006, 00:58:38 UTC

Wow.

I really like this. Your Neville is awesome.

ishibishispider February 12 2006, 01:05:19 UTC

Thank you so very much ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I adore writing for Neville :D

x_ning February 12 2006, 03:04:51 UTC

Oh, the emotion. I started tearing up, and I felt my throat closing up. You gave Neville life, and really, I'm just so. Sigh. Beautiful, once again, and always. ♥

ishibishispider February 16 2006, 07:13:56 UTC

Thanks so much darling, your feedback is always very much cherished ♥

ILU!

jeauexe February 12 2006, 04:05:11 UTC

You gave Neville a beliveable personality and character.

Thanks for writing this.

+ to mems

ishibishispider February 16 2006, 07:14:39 UTC

Thank you darling! I'm glad I achieved my purpose ♥

*HUGS*