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ishibishispider in spidergasm

Draco/Bellatrix : Failure

Jan 29, 2006 12:20

Asdfhjsdf, I was drabbling the other day and came up with this. So, I thought I'd share it with you guys :D

Title: Failure
Length: 365 words
Fandom: Harry Potter
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and ( Read more... )

harry potter, draco/bellatrix, fanfiction

Comments 16

lemonslices January 29 2006, 01:27:15 UTC

"With a strength and swiftness she cannot quite she fathom he could muster, Draco has her aligned with the wall, his parched lips a defiant line against hers and his hand fisted in her rough hair."

Gahhhhhhhhhhh. So. good.

Lovedlovedloved this!

ishibishispider January 29 2006, 01:34:34 UTC

Ssdfjkg. Fastest response ever :O!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much ♥

leanansidhe6 January 29 2006, 04:02:57 UTC

"With a strength and swiftness she cannot quite she fathom he could muster..."

Maybe I just need to go to bed here, but is there an extra "she" that makes no sense?

ishibishispider January 29 2006, 05:46:29 UTC

Ahahah, oh God, no I'm the one who should go to bed *fixes mistake*

Thanks for pointing it out to me :D.

jeauexe January 29 2006, 08:31:30 UTC

He fumbles at her throat from fatigue; he wrestles with her frame due to utter inexperience. He is a beast propelled by hot loathing and coherent fear as he brings her to her knees with a violent wrench, the joints in her neck crackling in an incongruous melody.

Awww... this is lovely ♥

ishibishispider January 29 2006, 11:34:50 UTC

Thank you so much dear! ♥

Icon love :D

jeauexe January 30 2006, 03:55:52 UTC

xDD~

freudiantrip January 29 2006, 11:10:12 UTC

Amazing. I absolutely love the way you write. All your fiction is just beautiful. Adding Spidergasm to my friends list ♥

ishibishispider January 29 2006, 11:37:12 UTC

Thank you so much, that's such a wonderful thing to say ♥. I'm very flattered you like the way I write!

Thanks for the adding too :D

tumbledstars January 29 2006, 18:21:01 UTC

Very lovely darling. Dark and full of mood... poor Draco :(

ishibishispider January 30 2006, 01:23:37 UTC

HOW ARE YOU? Did you get my email? If you didn't, I am so omg sorry, gmail is giving me strife :(

Thanks bubsy ♥

tumbledstars January 30 2006, 13:25:27 UTC

I'm okay. I haven't gotten any email :( maybe it's Yahoo? Maybe it's gmail... Arrgh! Me want Ishi-mail! XD