Thin Red Lines - For Jess

[avsno26rocks]

Title: Thin Red Lines
Characters/Pairings: Oliver/Katie
Rating: Professors
Warnings: Strong Profanity, Sexual Situations, Self Harm
Author’s Note: BIG TRIGGER WARNING FOR SELF HARM!  If you are easily triggered, please do not read.
Inspired by If You Only Knew by Shinedown.  Lyrics from the same song.
Huge thanks to Lily for the beta and a huge

Comments

[soraya786]

Really powerful story there, o mystery author. I really enjoyed reading how Katie and Oliver's relationship developed over time and how Katie totally overworked herself trying to be good enough to play Quidditch. And, of course, Oliver is such a babe, too. XD Lovely stuff!

[avsno26rocks]

Sorry I didn't comment sooner, but I was mostly flailing to finish my own story and just had time to read it quickly. This time, though, I got to enjoy it

[avsno26rocks]

Overall, this is a stunning fic. The characterisation was rich, well-considered, and raw. Coupled with crisp storytelling and careful themes, it is by far my favourite story of yours I've ever read. I am not just saying this because it was a gift for me, but rather because I genuinely feel like you hit so many homeruns with this that it can't help but float to the top. Very, very well done, and thank you very much for this beautiful gift.

*hugs*

Jess

[maplemapffypie]

Oh my gosh Jess, I just saw this now! Thanks so much for all your lovely analysis - I'm so glad it worked for you, because I was so unsure of it.

Eep, smiles for days :)