With Narcissa, for Jenna

Jan 06, 2009 22:49

Title: With Narcissa
For: Jenna
Characters/Pairings: Narcissa/Lily with reference to James/Lily
Rating: 6th-7th years
Warnings (if any): Slash, Sexual Situations
A/N: Dearest Jenna, I hope that this is what you wanted for Christmas and that you really enjoy it. Although this was a new pairing for me, I think that it worked out well. Merry ( Read more... )

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aiseiri_47 January 6 2009, 23:32:31 UTC
*FLAIL*

Okay, I did't even open the document until tonight (not because I wasn't interested, I just have amazing self-control with these things. And years of practice). And I just was like OMG! when I saw the pairing. You actually wrote Narcissa/Lily for me! I love you!

And it was so good x.x

So, real. I felt like I was Lily. I understood so much of it. Even the part about being cold, even though the world around you isn't quite the cause. And about feelings not so much going away, but being dormant. And, I just love that. I love reading real, complex human feelings that I can connect to. And I love connecting to Lily.

And Narcissa in the snow! How beautiful was that?

The *ahem* scene in the Slyth common room was gorgeous. And wonderfully not NC-17 so you can post it to MNFF and I can leave you an insane review :D

Thank you SO much, dear. Seriously. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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fif5 January 7 2009, 00:40:52 UTC
Well, I'm all J/L, but I must admit, this was amazing. The way it was written, the whole plot... just fab.

- Afifa

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jenny_b09 January 7 2009, 10:53:23 UTC
This was so lovely. Narcissa dancing in the snow was just gorgeous, and I loved the little scene with the snowflake in her hair. :)

You've portrayed Lily so wonderfully - the whole thing about her feeling empty and cold was so real.

My heart broke at the part where Lily is thinking about how she wasn't really happy with James. It was just ... aw. :(

An absolutely delightful read, dear.

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