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Between The Woods & Frozen Lake, for Brittany

Jan 06, 2009 22:33

Title: Between The Woods & Frozen Lake
For: Brittany
Characters/Pairings: James/Lily
Rating: PG
Warnings (if any): One sexual reference.
A/N: To dear Brittany, I tried my best to make it both cozy and wintry. :) I do hope so very much that you enjoy it.

( Snow doesn't make a sound when it falls, Lily. )

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Comments 4

bbbeans741 January 6 2009, 23:20:46 UTC

WHOO! I love you. =) Jeez, you genius, I didn't even have any idea how anyone would incorporate that poem.

It was so very lovely and fantastically written.

Thank you so much.

You made me smile and feel all fuzzy. =D Yay!

*hugs*

fif5 January 7 2009, 00:27:33 UTC

Very sweet. =]Love it.

- Afifa

jenny_b09 January 7 2009, 06:33:02 UTC

Wooow. That was just so incredibly beautiful.

I especially loved the dialogue; it was so sweet and fresh and just seemed so perfect for James and Lily. :)

Well done!

msqu January 8 2009, 03:42:00 UTC

Jenna, this is such a wonderful and tender and complete moment between James and Lily. I love it quite a lot.

I just love the way the conversation plays between them. It's like there's this undercurrent from James of just... awe that he's finally like this with Lily, and she's so in love, but she has her mild insecurities, which she shouldn't have, but of course she does, because that's who we girls are. It's so real and beautiful.